UNBOUNDED HEARTBEATS

This is a beautiful piece with a sad beginning but the Gramma is on point and I really like the way the story is portrayed .... The characters are simple but portrayed they way they should be .. it made me cry in the beginning and IAM hoping for the best from the Author .... I have read a few books with in one chapter I just remove it from my library Y? 1. You may wonder hmm the rushed stories if a story is rushed it becomes too boring and too predictable . A rushed book doesn't give the proper meaning of the story plus you may read a story with out understanding it's clear vision by the time you realize it has ended with out picking anything out of it we read these books to learn from , wether painfully, joyous, in love and out of love, behavior ,common knowledge ,away out , general knowledge , out standing experiences , people are out their reading and going through the same scenarios and the story may be the get away of everything . Knowledge is power so as an Author the power you have it's what brings change in others. People need to be curious about a story and this is what it is even if it has only a few chapters I feel I want to read more ... People like to be piqued this story is amazing . I'm super duper curious about it 😉 about your Book. 2. Books with too much exaggeration of a character believe me it becomes boring ,this applies to all wether the first leads or second leads I mean even if they tend to be the reason behind the story it still becomes boring if they are the know it all and do it all ....I like both happy ,sad endings and beginnings with the characters scripts but all must be carted for in the same manner .its what drives adventurous ...please keep it in mind for now you my have my five but still the book will attain more readers . I m loving where it's heading and I hope you keep responding to reviews comments and keep updating and being involved your your first fun and motivator ....Keep up the Good work even if it's short if it brings tears in both eyes and leave it that way the story will be alive