Uchiha through the multiverse

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MkoPoland

Hope not harem becouse its very nice to read, Post more.................................................................................................

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The_Grey_Deity

The author is a very cultured man, and the story isn't bad either. I rate it 15 guilds out of 6 kingdoms. Why are you down here? Go read the story!

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DogeLuvReadin

The one eyed black dragon never died. It was originally called the black dragon but then Albert Wallenstein (Ais’s Dad) gave his life taking out one of its eyes. Then it hid for over a decade and then Bell killed it. The Zeus and Hera familia were wiped out and that’s how canon starts. So basically this story has an inte resting premise but the intire beginning is wrong, and it means the rest of the story is wrong. Also the chapters are short, so don’t read.

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The_Dao

YES MMOOOORREEE ...

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TheDecanter

I very much like the premise of no harem and am glad with how the story is progressing. The main character is also able to use his intelligence (despite the fact that he went to a place which I presume was a brothel, though that could be my misunderstanding, or not.) Not to the point of extreme genius though, as he could have wished for primordial eyes or something that could turn into any sort of special eyes, well you get the point. There is also a need for improvement in the transition of the story, everything just happens so suddenly or that there is a vague flow of events happening and the mc seems to have some natural affinity to women despite the no-harem tendencies. The only other misgiving I have is that it's still new and that there are very few chapters to immerse to. I hope the story will progress to the original premise of absolute-no-harem and no blushing beauties everywhere the mc goes. It would also be presentable if the mc could go unto different universes, and actually immerse himself unto them, rather than the clones themselves doing the task for him, and I also would want for the author to further explore the various important characters in the worlds the mc explores, such as the first featured known character (Bell Cranel from Danmachi), and in this regard, it would be nice if the mc could explore the different sides of these important characters that were not shown in the anime or in the different artworks they originate, in this way, the story will add a unique twist unto it rather than just following events without experiencing them thoroughly. I myself would very much want to know what main characters from famous novels do in their everyday lives when they're not collecting women, pursuing a one-in-a-century fortune, or committing genocide. Though him building strength could be done by his clones, it would be best if he also had significant development such as in character, where in the earlier parts, isn't as profuse. I have already made such a fuss though I am not sure if the author even reads comments.

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OsloTheUnkown

Their is an overall great comedic tone for the story, although there hasn't been many encounters with a serious one, I still think the Author did a great job writing those also. Overall the story is very entertaining, their is a couple of spelling errors I did spot, but it doesn't make the story unreadable, and I find my brain corrects it most of the time. I find this a great change of pace from all the harem novels, which is basically 95% of stories on here, personally not my cup of tea. Now for the stuff I think needs some improving... The MC is often arriving at different locations, and readers are often given confirmations such as. And I finally arrived at "Place" But there isn't a description of the surroundings. The Author did a great job describing the MC's appearance and clothing at the start, so I do believe they have the skills to write it. 8.5/10

I am the author and i shall commit self review MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ................................................................

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DaoistkAiMKM

Can you share the picture?Can you share the picture?Can you share the picture?Can you share the picture?Can you share the picture?Can you share the picture?

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DaoistkAiMKM

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sensey_ninja

..........................................................................................preaty good ................ ......................

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288110

“„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” Проттьд крот ты заполнение “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” ДА НЕТ ДА НЕТ ТЫ ЧЕЛ ПО “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” Пропеллер ла заполнение “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„” “„”

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Sukuna_R

There's nothing special about this but basically I like fanfiction about the Naruto anime or can you say the power in the Naruto world? Well that kind of thing,, well basically I like things like switching anime

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Vennyon

Shameless review from the author himself! A week ago, I removed all the previous chapters and rewritten them. New plot, new character, same wishes What can you expect from this novel? Well... → Overpowered Chuuni → No technique shouting → No HAREM NO HAREM NO HAREM → Romance? I think? → Plot Holes Give it a try, I use grammarly and always check at least 5 times if there are any grammatical errors, so I'm pretty confident about my writing

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RemovedJeans420

I like this it is a cool thing and i hope it goes some where and not dropped it is better then the other ones in my opinion at least…….………….….

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T_A_O

bruh, is this dropped or did you forgot to update this??

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aiden_rivera

just wish there was more detailed and better transactions to the next thing he does that's it . that's all that was bad about it the writing, idea, powers, you using earth grudge and all of creation and chamera ,amazing man

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grammer_police

pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue pls continue