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Twins of the Sea -Remastered (Completed)
4.16 (56 เรตติ้ง)
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Zeus, a 18 year old boy got sent into reincarnation by our ever faithful Truck-kun and wound up being born as Monkey D. Zeus, Monkey D. Luffy's twin brother.
This is Twins of the Sea remastered. It's going to be different. I'm not going to delete the original though, so go read it if you want to know what changed.
Also this is NOT A HAREM kinda weird right? But Author-sama! I hear you saying If you don't have a Harem it's trash!
Actually, that's not true! There's plenty of Harems out there you can read those instead! WOAH! CRAZY! INSANE! NEVER DONE BEFORE!
Peace.
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I got super invested into this novel and the mc even had a great love interest in nami then the auther desided to go back and Change the chapters and to Make it go away ruining it.
The truth is, I expected much, much less from this story, but I managed to be impressed, I liked it, of course, it feels like it's going too fast but somehow it also seemed to fit in well, I really love it, I recommend it !!!
dropped, it was a good novel, but the author decided to change the love interest in nami and ruined everything for me, it remains a good romance. ps: I only gave it a star because I'm having a tantrum
I honestly wish I could’ve made this a four star but the 3.8 is my actual rating on the topic of story quality and not just some feelings getting ahead of my actions. While I’m not a big fan of your previous works and don’t generally enjoy fast paced story telling, I do believe this was done decently but could still use some work. Fast paced story telling requires a foundation in order to be successful, that foundation being the world building. If the world isn’t interesting enough to draw people in, then going fast is just a quick way to screw your story over big time. Going fast already limits most of what you could do in a slow paced story, such as actual character development readers can be invested in, and extra little details that make your characters just feel more fleshed out instead of cardboard cutouts that only say a simple variation of things pre recorded. But since this is One Piece and most of the world is already built for you, you going fast doesn’t screw you over as much as it should have, which is why 'World Building' is a 3 instead of the 1-2 it should’ve gotten. But sadly that doesn’t completely stop the damage. I enjoy the story very much and look forward to updates, but I’m gonna have to say I won’t be expecting much from it other than a quick but somewhat interesting read. I wish you good luck if you’ve actually read all of that, if you haven’t, well whatever.
its meh like I was really invested in the MCxNami ship but then the author bombed it to all all but saying that he sees Nami as a sister while its clear she has a huge crush on him and then theres the overarching part of him just manipulating everything for no real or clear goal so it just feels weird and theres a lot of foreshadowing but none of its happened whitch kills the suspence after like 10 chapters and what not overall its a meh novel not the best but also not the worst
Everything is good except for too much Drama, Too emotional. The MC is such a drama queen. ................................ ................................
I DoNt LiKe ThE bOoK, also, “obviously biased” hmmmmmmm not like reviews are supposed to be about what we think or anything, they should definitely not be biased
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wow just wow... if you are not reading this novel then you are really missing out on a lot of amazing things.ok let's see.. 1. it has long chapters around 1500 to 2500. this is a win in my book. 2. the character development is amazing, I actually feel like the MC Zeus is actually a real person. He might seem ruthless but he has emotions and a motive for them. 3. this deserves recognition and it's the backstory, it actually nearly made me cry. 4. the character interaction is really believable and my favourite catch phrase ever. "do you believe it?" this is actually a significant part of his character. ok big spoilers if u dont want it just skip the bracket line. (I actually think it was for the better for Bonney and Persephone to end up with Zeus instead of Nami, dont widen your eyes at me and give hate to the author for it, their relationship gets really good) the only complaint would be that it is not as interesting at the beginning but this is easily overshadowed by the brilliance of the latter chapters. I have read all 82 chapters and I really enjoyed this book, i was always waiting for a new chapter everyday. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT. READ THIS NOVEL. IT EVEN HAS JOKES, COME ON READ IT DO IT, JUST DO IT.
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Well this is single handily one of my favorite fan-fics out there! plus thanks to you I've got more theories about one piece and I'm coming up with questions because of it! so thank you for making this and keep up the good work!
Wow nice fanfiction I can say that is one of my most favorite one piece fanfic hope that you wound drop it Author-sama and maybe slow down the pace a little bit so that we can enjoy more chapters xD
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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Not bad, not bad. I look forward to continuing. Author, I do not see all of your work on your profile ... Why? Not bad, not bad. I look forward to continuing. Author, I do not see all of your work on your profile ... Why?
Really enjoy this one from beginning to end. Very good comedy and Characters. The MC is funny and seems ´real´, and the story which progresses parallel to the straw hats voyage is interesting and original. My only minus is how the love interests in the story were handled. Up to the first third of the novel everything was pointing at Nami, with her admitting her feelings, and MC after several private breakdowns and his own development as a person slowly accepting his own feeling. It seemed genuine and good... until it suddenly ended and he says he sees her as a sister. No explanation, no build up, no climax or fall apart. MC woes another Girl (bonney), and gets together with her. Now dont get me wrong. The story and build up between MC and Bonny is also exteremely well written, and really wolesome so i personally got over, and even liked it. But considering everything with Nami, it felt a little incostistent especially with how the two of them remained after he brought bonny to the straw hats. I never read the novel before it was remastered so i could live with it but i also can understand why so many people rant over it. I STRONGLY recommend this one to anyone. Top notch Comedy, Romance, Originality and Character writing
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The "Remastered" Version is not even near the original Version. I really don´t understand why you stopped the Original ..................................
This is personally one of the best Fan-fictions I ever read. Also overall one of the first that I read through and I can tell you that I cried more and harder than the previous twins of the sea. I got also goosebumps from the epic scenes and laughed at the funny comedy. I really loved to read this, it was a great story and I hope I can introduce it to my friends who dont even like to read novels/ Fan-fics.
I dropped just because of what the author did with nami, I preferred before the remaster. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------