Twin Dovakiin

LV 6

DarkKnight32

the only bad thing about this novel that the MC has the mentality of a side kick and talks to much of his knowledge of the future to her. If they really fought MC should be able to kill her quite easily but he thinks of himself as the weaker one. this mentality really ruins the stoey for me he should be the MC not that girl, pretty sure the good thing for him should be travelling alone after getting a bit stronger he should make his own story because right now he is just a side kick to her story.

LV 15

Ragnar_black

so far it's been really descriptive might be slow now but I'd rather it like this than it just ending on chap 50. . .

LV 3

Jaden_Gist

Pls make more............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 10

Primordial_Phoenix

disgusting the fact than anybody would ever want to be seen close to those disgusting cat people is a disgrace the only thing more pathetic than the disgusting cat people are those deformed Orcs

LV 11

9Lightning

Decent so far -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 3

Gabichu_Yeah

Weak and cowardly MC, weak and beta mentality and severe inferiority complex towards a supporting character Luna 1/5 Not recommended.......................

LV 1

Diesirae

very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good

LV 3

Leyxs

Very good. +++++8++++±++++++++++++++++++++++±+++++++++++;+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++±+++±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++(++++++++++++++-+++++_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+"+_+_++_+_+__+_++_+__+"+_++__+_+_+_+_++_+_+__+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_

LV 4

Rational_madness

It is hard to bear to read about a mc being disgusted and vomitting from killing for 5 chapters in a row when fanfic has slightly over 10. No one wants to read about the mc's mental breakdown from killing.

LV 1

Diesirae

Dude it's perfect there's nothing I wanted to change Just keep this story going ++++++++++++++++±++++++++++±±±±±±±±+++±+++±+++±++±+++¥^¢××¢{¢¶¢}`^`¥`×¢¶€}€=|^`π

LV 3

Jaden_Gist

Your back yay can't wait for more ........................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 3

Jaden_Gist

Good so far................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................