Traveling in the Animeverse As Madara

LV 4

LeoArcadia

Shameless Author I'm giving myself a 5 Star because why not because i'm a shameless author. I'm new to writing so i might make a lot of mistake's so bear with me i'll try to improve my writing im open to any suggestion.

LV 10

Darte

Generally I criticize the story a little and point out some flaws here and there, but this one gave a new meaning to the expression plot hole, in less than a day he arrives in Orario and uses genjutsu to get in, I don't know why he finds information on the street. Astrea family and goes to floor 30 of the dungeon, not to mention the fight that is a dead narrative "I used a failed attack, I used a second attack it worked" end of the fight. I didn't even continue reading because wow, this story doesn't even have room for improvement, it doesn't have character development, relationships, the story itself, so author, I suggest you start rewriting this story and improve these flaws because instead of a story it seems like I'm reading a summary from wikipedia.

LV 3

Kuuhaku_28

The story is interesting, but it doesn't make sense that MC doesn't get lost when he first enters the dungeon up to the 30th floor

LV 15

Gh0st00

just based on the fact it's a pokemon harem not worth the time...

LV 12

Aster_ainosDaoist

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LV 3

DavidRK

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