Tokyo Revenger: Domination

Shameless author self 5-star review. If you have any questions regarding the story just comment below. Note: English is not my mother tongue, there will be many grammatical errors and overused of boring words, but that will not mean there is no improvement. Okay enough for that, enjoy the story!

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Loving it, But I would like to give you a few suggestions: 1. Use Grammarly for better grammar also please use commas and capitalize letter. 2. Harem would ruin this fic so no-harem would be better for anime like Tokyo Revengers. 3. Use scene breaker like '----' so that scenes are not clustered. 4. Don't make main character too op like being able to counter guns and such. 5. Since Tokyo Revengers relies on Time-Travel, and if you are planning on bringing Time Travel as well make sure you have solid plans for what happens to main character. Good luck author!!!

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nice

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5 ch yet has not got his system yet even when he got kicked in the head for no reason and was angry he still did not fight because of a girl(simp)

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