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As people live for attaining power or popularity, See how a peaceful mind can help a person attend every thing he needed as we follow Yuki Rito as he achieved what unknown to the world.
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-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
6รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Hello everyone I am the author of this great story and would like your attention to write some reviews once I finish 4 to 5 chapter and please gave me some power stone to make this fanfic famous and I promise you guys will definitely love this fan fic with great story development.
The writing style is confusing at times and that’s a big turn of. The old man god as mentor made the goddess useless. She doesn’t bring anything noteworthy to the original LARGE female cast. There are people from other works, should have warned us about crossovers (but that’s a minor). There is room for improvement. Good luck 👍.
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Well... What can i say? i like "to love-ru" fanfics but its a big turnoff when you read a whole paragraph and you must use your knowledge in English to fix the mistakes found, add comas and re-organize everything to understand what you just read...