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Tinted hearts

Fantasy 15 ตอน 24.7K จำนวนคนดู
นักเขียน: Debbie_Rozz

4.86 (14 เรตติ้ง)

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Mira, Summer, and Phoebe are close friends who are also orphans, they come from different worlds but are held together by a secret, their scars from the past made them the people they are today. Everything changes when their secret of being half-demons were exposed by an unknown person,

They became hunted by demon hunters whose mission is to kill all demons. In their run for their lives, they discovered hidden secrets and uncover the mystery behind their existence. They are the destined demons who would bring chaos and destruction to the world by opening the get of hell. As they struggled to survive from the hunters they got separated and sent to different realms.

They try to fight their destiny and also bring the realms together to fight the common enemy. But what if fighting their destiny was fulfilling it? Will they allow the past to hunt them and determine their future, or will they let it go and move on?

Joining the girls in their journey of being accepted, finding meaning, and finding love.

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4.86

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A_fed_up_reader

I love the story so far, it's interesting and yeah you could try to improve your synopsis .there are grammatical mistakes but everything else is good .I look forward to future chapters .just keep updating regularly without fail

2yr
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Ready_

I must say that romance is not usually my cup of tea and it's still not but, what belongs to one must be given back to that person, the grammar is good and the story is progressing, not getting hindered by anything, the world is given a background and many common questions are answered right away, the characters are well fleshed out as well, only issue is the large size of the paragraph wich make the reading a bit complicated but overall, it''s fine craft.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Vanila_Michelle

Wow, it is an amazing book. I like the cover, story telling also the characters name. Mira and Summer, cool. Keep writing, Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Eclipse_Ranger

A very good story for those who love romance................................................................................. ... ...... .......................

2yr
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ReyRizS

just gonna leaeve a review and by the way its a good story..................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ona_Gold

Your synopsis is kind of confusing but when I read the story I can say that the story idea is really good. It's an interesting read with few errors. I'd love if you can shorten the paragraphs though, it makes the book look clunky. I'll add this to my library in anticipation of more chapters. 😇

2yr
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Sphire1707

While the writing style leaves quite a bit to be desired as it was quite confusing at times. It has quite the interesting concept. Full of thrilling mysteries and if you are especially particular about this genre, I can gurantee that you'd be having dreams to figure what happens next. I recommend giving it a read

2yr
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JescykaCharm

Not your everyday fantasy book. the author brought the characters to life. The blurb was what caught my attention. I do have one complaint though. please upload more chapters as soon as possible. Expecting more from this author

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Daoist5xRgH8

I love the way the book is going, it's an amazing book,it keeps you captivated, and on the edge, I love the character development , can't wait for the next update.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Favour_Oguibe

The story is very captivating , I love the story line , the characters, I love the way the story is heading and also the way the Author put everything all together, I must give these book a five star

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jims_Rid

There's still room for improvement for writing quality but the story development is good. The dialogues are well written and the characters have a life-like hue to them. I look forward to the direction of the story

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ItsHashi

Hmm... i read through it, i would recommend making the chapters a little longer since with only 3-5 paragraphs its not enough. The chapter titles, i’d recommend doin it like ”(Ch.1) Title” that way the “chapter” doesnt take too much space. I should also separate paragraphs and make them shorter, a good way of separating the paragraphs is when people talk. You shouldnt put two dialogues in one paragraph since that doesnt happen in the same moment. Thats it from me right mow and dont give up with the story. Fight on💪😤💪!

2yr
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Nancy_Micheal_4985

wow author like your story is amazing fantasy and romance at the same time im so impressed im a fan of your book the characters and plot is so well planned I just can't wait for the next chapter I will rate your story with all 5 star

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Itsurbff_who_reads

The world building is very well built and the characters have very cool personalities. it is a very good book so far! I like the plot and the writing. I didn’t give 5 stars because there’s a few things I’d change. One advice would be make sure to keep the paragraphs short. Try to do that because otherwise the writing will look all squished in together. Other then that it’s very good! 😊

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ

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