The yellow flash of jujutsu high

LV 14

Miky_Mate

This is kinda trash I’m ngl, the grammar is horrible (borderline unreadable) the story feels very robotic and emotionless

LV 4

M_Static

monotone and boring narration. no storytelling.

LV 4

ThePpp_Pppp

I can't believe I didn't get first review someone beat me to it…somehow.. Anyway this story does use Gemini ai thought unlike the last story this time it's mainly used to do descriptions I can't really do yet and the dialogues along with how they interact were written by me.

LV 4

DaoistdEbak2

This is a good one among jjk's fanfic that i've seen tbh, but our guy really about to become a binding vow merchant😂😂

LV 14

Victor_7740

The ai is so heavy in this one B h. J

LV 6

Clown_Of_God

Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 1/5 because I can't give 0(ZERO) marks Character Design 1/5 World Background 3/5 jujutsu world in the beginning but something original after. I wanted to say that initially, it was a jujutsu kaisen fanfic. Still, after the MC lost 2 out of 2 fights with Gojo Satoru the author lost the ties of the story and turned it into an original shounem fanfic with original characters that are not part of the original jujutsu kaisen manga/anime. He only left the use of cursed energy within this fanfic. If you want an OP MC with the skills, experience, and intelligence equal to Namikaze Minato along with Gojo Satoru then this fic is not for you and not for anyone who wants a jujutsu kaisen fic with an original MC.

LV 2

ivar_001

I really liked the story, but we do have to be critical; I would say that there is a lot of dialogue but little action, I want to give my opinion if the author is willing, and I wish Kenjaku was more dangerous than Hera in the original, he was a waste of a villain and died in a very pathetic way, I also want to advise you that they add a new villain at Sukuna's level, I say this because Minato and Gojo would end Sukuna like taking candy from a child and it would be very boring; and that's all my opinion and my review, I really liked it, I expect great things from this story, thank you. ahh another thing, put another shinigami for the MC that is for battle or defense, I would like that a lot 🤧

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LV 10

ZeroXHSR

I haven't read this yet, but I like the concept, so keep going guys....please don't go on hiatus , that's all, but because writing a review can't be less than 140 words, so I'll write anything

LV 3

Ayub_Novel

Its actually really good, excellent use of AI. i don't even notice that I really like this story the only down side is that there aren't enough chapters

LV 4

ThePpp_Pppp

I can't believe I didn't get first review someone beat me to it…somehow.. Anyway this story does use Gemini ai thought unlike the last story this time it's mainly used to do descriptions I can't really do yet and the dialogues along with how they interact were written by me.

LV 3

HaremHater

I mean there’s nothing spectacular about it but the author should proofread his chaps and idk but it i dont tjink english is his main language

LV 4

T1tanz

i had fun reading it so full 5 stars for me. it has interesting insight what might happen outside japan jujutsu world. sorry for not being able to provide useful criticism🙏 keep the good work author 👍 can't wait for the next chapter