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Enkai Myojo was five years old when his family got caught up in a car accident where his father died leaving a family of 3 behind.
Years later, in the middle of a class, he got sent to another world with his classmates.
Board with us to follow the adventures of the White Swordsman across the worlds.
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Release : 4 ch/week. (This release rate will begin after the first 5 chapter) except if I'am in the mood for more.
1st World : Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou
[English is not my first language, I am writing to improve myself]
Cover is not mine I found it at : https://www.pinterest.ru/pin/646125877767060487/
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Decent story. Grammar could use a lot of work, however. MC is just a bit too edgy for my tastes as well and has the typical tragic background to add a smidgen of depth to his character but even that isn't written very well. Bit of personal bias here but--Speed isn't the only asset to be used by a swordsman. They value strength in their swings just as much as they value the speed of the swing. With a class like 'Sword Saint' I expected the MC to be the ultimate swordsman with both amazing speed and incredible strength but no. It's just the same old recipe: speedy swordsman who uses his speed and ''skill'' to take out his opponents before they can react. There's nothing fun about that. Whatever. Good luck with continuing the story, I guess.
To be honest, the author just needs to do a few tweaks and this could be a great story. Just a little bit less edge for the MC, its a bit too much and he just seems weird not cool. Er also, please make him work on his strength like the other review said. Strength is crucial for swordsmen, a speed build is good, but without strength speed is useless. Also maybe you can ask someone to go over your chapters and check your grammar and english, just to improve it !
who is the mc in this story, even Hajime or Enkai? I can understand that you from the hajime character in the anime even I like it but it’s getting boring it’s already focusing more on Hajime than the mc
please write more it is such a good story I absolutely love it,..............................................................................
I've read 2 chapters and can tell that author has bad grammar, almost unreadable fic, I checked the stability of updates and it's a mess, I don't really know story development and world background in the fic because I dropped it after reading second chap thus rating those with 3 stars, character design is alright, MC is true to himself.
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quite interesting MC alternate for hajime, still the portrayed kouki here is more annoying than ever, will hajime still going to learn creation magic ? cause it's very useful for him
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I'm really enjoying the story. Grammar could be a bit better but its good enough to stop me from getting distracted due to it. The protagonist is kinda too edgy but I still like him. I mean most of the edginess we have seen from him comes from his conversations with Kouki and I feel like most OC characters treat Kouki like shit (he does deserve it.) Shizuku has always been my favorite heroine so I'm excited to her being the main love interest. Keep writing and improving author and good luck!
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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It is an incredible story I hope you do not abandon it, I will be waiting for more chapters 👌👌👌👌👌👌😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌😍😍😍😍😍😍
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It's an alright novel, the things I don't like are how the mc acts like he has bipolar, don't even use the excuse of 'oh he's a teenager ' not even teenagers act that way and I get that you wanted MC to be friends with hajime but that friendship didn't solve hajime situation at all which I find unbelievable, he beat up the bullies but they still bully him, yeah no one knew who beat the bullies up but the bullies knew didn't they, and you made hajime fall inside the dungeon as well so at this point who is the Mc,is it hajime because the Mc to me looks like a side character.