The War of the Primals

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Alb22

One day, I discovered that what I truly loved doing in life was reading novels, discovering new works, imagining new concepts to make a character I loved stronger, and, why not, creating my own character in a work and evolving them in my imagination. I would sometimes spend hours doing this without realizing it, with a smile on my face. Unfortunately, as time passes, we grow older, and with that comes responsibilities. Especially being African, where society always frowns upon someone who, at a certain age, still maintains a passion they developed since adolescence. I can still hear them saying to me: "It's time for you to grow up, Alban." So, I recently found myself having to choose between my passion for reading and my ever-burgeoning imagination, and my need to create a monthly income, even if it meant having to abandon my passion. I ultimately decided to combine the two by creating my own original work: "The War of the Primals". It's still in its early stages, and I promise to do my best not to disappoint you. So, even if it's a bit selfish of me, I would really appreciate it if you could help me get it known. A comment to let me know if you enjoy it would help me a lot, you have no idea. As improving is also at the heart of my goals, I would also be delighted to read your constructive criticism. Thank you very much, dear reader.

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novelmeister

An overused concept combined with an otherworldy destiny makes for a great story. Unfortunately, this isn’t unique, and leads me to give you an imperfect rating. Keep writing! 🙂

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Azzidine7thepisces

hey, it's the same as me i think, like imagining, creating and discovering

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adam_Jamaes

Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers

I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"