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Jack's journey in TWD
I wrote this story 2 years ago and I can't believe I wrote this, but I thought maybe some people would like to make fun of it. I had some great laughs reading some of the comments.
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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
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- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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will you continue to write the novel or the other one with john these two novels are good i would be happy Unfortunately too short why do your novels always end when it gets exciting xD
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from what I can say about the story is that it is nonsense , there is no information from the beginning that says he came from "marvel" , he has powers , but he acts like a normal person and the relationship is weird , he gets his girl pregnant because of the plot , among other things that if I didn't appreciate the effort to write something , even if it doesn't make that much sense , I would have put 1 star xD *in conclusion there is not so much coherence in what he does xD.