/ Fantasy / The Unbidden World
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A long time ago, a hero was reincarnated into a strange world, summoned to fight his way through the demon king’s horde and claim victory. At the end of his journey, his deeds earned him godhood and the opportunity to create something new; However, a botched attempt at world creation leads him to take up a new cause, and aiming to study the world he created, he sets out to discover it’s history.
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สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
2รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
A genuinely interesting story. Though I only read two chapters, the characters and plot are interesting and the writing style is good. There is an occasional minor spelling error but that's rare. I'm curious about the future chapters and it mixes comedy really well.
So far I am quite enjoying the story other than a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes; for example, in chapter 1 you used the word transliterated, I think maybe you meant transformed? In chapter three, "However, her attention was capued by the ringing of the bell on the door as they walked in, and her expression quickly became as negative as that of her patrons." It should have been "captured" instead of "capued" Although, there are a few grammatical errors (Punctuation) and spelling mistakes, the story from sentence to sentence/paragraph to pargraph flows well.