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The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy (A One Piece Fanfiction)
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This is a story where Luffy ate the Rumble-Rumble fruit, a logia class devil fruit and became a lightning man instead of a rubber man. Luffy also showed signs of Haki at a young age so Shanks decided to take him with them to train Luffy. Godlike Luffy! More serious/smart Luffy who acts more like a captain. Please read to find out more.
THIS STORY IS ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET BY ME. I AM THE ORIGINAL AUTHOR OF THIS STORY!
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ONE PIECE.
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I really like this novel. THIS IS NOT CANON ONE PIECE, this is one piece with a true OP MC who knows the world and plays an active part in it. I’m a little sad that luffy doesn’t try to make friends with his crew like shanks does but he seems to love the king/captain persona. Anyway thank you author for this novel and I hope you will be able and willing to release more chapters in the future
MC with lightning and zap the enemy to ashes MC with good knowledge about his own world MC with good head MC with good plan MC with good gasp of his ability MC has strong allies ( Shank ) and recognized by the strong ( Hawk-Eye) MC is not wimp No NTR No bull**** brotherhood which then leaving his crew because being poached in front of public with excuse being weak and to protect his crew and blal bal bla. Thunder Demon in truest form not some wimpy Pirate called them self Heavenly Demon from novel True King of the Pirates that submit to mere BEAST pirate.
Amen For I had seen everything now A Luffy that is not stupid A Luffy that is OP A Luffy that don't just relied on plot armor A Luffy that actually prepares for his journey to became King of the Pirates A Luffy that actually look cool
Hmmm... are you the original author of this story? I’m asking this because I’ve read this on FanFiction.Net with a different name. That’s actually where I got my inspiration from for my own fic. If you are the original author, that’s awesome, but if you aren’t... shame on you for stealing.
This is one of if not the best fanfiction I have ever read. The way you connect the story and the way you transition scene from scene is the work of a master. The characters feel real. The overall story is nicely written, it feels like I'm reading a new chapter of one piece. All the joy I had when reading the manga I feel here. I highly recommend this fanfiction.
Love your story, Hope you can update soon or at least once in a week. And I really hope that the new ship would be something suit this luffy
It would be so absurd ace to die when luffy is so ovepowered so if you thinking about 2 years training luffy is smart enough to know that his crew are not strong enough for new world and yonko crew so he can send them himself. You know he and kuma can be friend and he might be plan that. Then go help ace and he can spent 2 years with his business in shodows etc.. Just please dont kill ace and whitebeard it would not fit the powerful, smart luffy story
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I give 5star for you because i have been reading your story from Fanfiction.net. hope you keep writing more.... Or rather i need more!!! Next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next
Good fanfic, keep it up ................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the story. It is one of few rare stories with Goro Goro no mi that isn't either trash or boring. The author actually goes out of canon. As should every fanfic. Luffy is done remarkably well for op MC. But the problem is update stability. If I could I would give update stability zero.
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Congratulations on becoming my first ever author to leave a review on This Fan-Fic is amazing and i loved it I just wish you would update more so i can keep reading
Too be honest at first I only looked the story up for fanfiction cause I liked the name 😁 but now I am reading it a second time. It’s one of the best stories I have read book or not and at times I find myself wishing your one piece story was cannon just waiting for the update on fanfiction cause it’s what I am mostly on anyway good luck with your other stories.
I am so tired the rumble Rumble devil fruit there are like 6 FanFictions that are about the same power. like I get it it's good but literally you could have anything else why is it always lightning
Good going more more more update please can't wait for the updates kick marine ass kick the three admril ass I hate light and magma thanks for the chapter and please don't drop it can't wait for the future arc Good going more more more update please can't wait for the updates kick marine ass kick the three admril ass I hate light and magma thanks for the chapter and please don't drop it can't wait for the future arc Good going more more more update please can't wait for the updates kick marine ass kick the three admril ass I hate light and magma thanks for the chapter and please don't drop it can't wait for the future arc Good going more more more update please can't wait for the updates kick marine ass kick the three admril ass I hate light and magma thanks for the chapter and please don't drop it can't wait for the future arc Good going more more more update please can't wait for the updates kick marine ass kick the three admril ass I hate light and magma thanks for the chapter and please don't drop it can't wait for the future arc thank you for always entertaining
The best one piece novel ever 😁 please dont drop it and update more chapters please.
I didn't read it ll but I like the idea, it's pretty cool. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I love this fan fic it is nice and long and makes me feel like i watched an episode of one piece. It is well wrote with almost no typos or bad grammar which is simply awesome. Each chapter is long and not rushed and makes you feel like the story is progressing at a steady pace and not take like 13 chapters to cover something. So simply put...FUCKING LOVE IT! Keep up awsome Aaron_Taichou