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Being reborn after a betrayal was good. Being reborn in the the Wizarding world is also good. Being reborn in a crossover reality between DC and Harry Potter, however... Not so good. It's also not good being reborn as a squib in such a reality.
However, Ned Stark won't let that get him down ! So what if he doesn’t have magic ? He just has to make his own ! As for the threats of the Multiverse and the crazy world he finds himself in, he just has to work hard on what he does best ! Programming, learning, improving himself and his machines... Ned Stark will rise and become one of the pillars of this world, one of its fiercest defender and protector !
Author note : currently posting 2-3 chapters a week
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is mc capable of magic? in dm there are plenty of mages who take magic from other sources and in hp there are only 'core' wizards
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rather good but the author had no need for hp x dc crossover. Dc has multiple sources of power has added benefit of non interference when using magic with tech around. The crossover didn't make much sense since MC is a squib. Just make a somewhat rich guy with armor or normal person with magic and armor....
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O don't know I'd it's good or not I didn't read it but I had a question why DC x HP I mean I'd the mc had magic than yeah make sense but as a squib not so much. squibs are not liked in magic world so he can only live in the mundane so DC as normal human cause he has no magic. so why over complicate the story
great fanfic there are not many good dc fanfics and much less if they are crosses I hope you don't abandon it. Good luck🙂🙂🙂
Its really good and original, love the MC ..............................................................................,..................
Great story if you are willing to let it develop. I was able to get through it quickly and had a great time doing so. Can't wait to see where you take this 😊
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I would give it a decent 3 rating. so, its worth reading if have a day off and nothing else to do. writing quality is good which is very rare nowadays from webnovel. Start of the story was fantastic and concept was also very good (basically the genius squib part in DC). but by the time 40-50 chapters are over it feels like complete filler. I don't know if the author planned for the takeover from metal thing (kudos to you if it was planned) but it felt like author was in a writing block and was just writing some filler chapters till he struck some inspiration. So, all in all I wouldn't recommend reading past chap-50. but still good effort.
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Iron lad in dcxhp world. What a concept! A world of power, mystery, and danger, even an evil organization that I'm pretty sure anyone can agree needs to be demolished. Am looking forward to where the author takes it.
[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]google translator: muy buena novela ,ojalá actualizaras mas amenudo
Era bom e interessante, até vim a parte que o protagonista teve o corpo roubado e basicamente deixou de ser humano pra ser AI, eu comecei ler por que achei interessante a dinâmica de Homem de Ferro na DC, porém isso desviou muito. E todo a trama do protagonista tendo seu corpo sendo roubado e usado pra fazer o mal e igual ao clichê de um super herói ter seu poder roubado e usado pra fazer o mal, foi aí que percebi que o protagonista e simplesmente estupido, ele trabalhou e criou muitas medidas de segurança pra proteger sua tecnologia, mais nunca fez nada para o próprio corpo. Mais ridículo ainda e que pra um personagem paranóico como foi apresentado no início, logo depois de perceber seu problema com sua mente, ele não tornou isso prioridade número um em resolver, naquele momento ele ainda estava no controle do seu corpo então por que alguém tão orgulhoso de seu gênio não tentou protege seu maior patrimônio ? Sinceramente a história foi decepcionante por causa dessa trama.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Gostei muito dessa história, alguns podem dizer que foi desnecessário o autor trazer o mundo de Harry Potter pro MC usar para sua mistura de magia e tecnologia, porém eu entendo que o autor simplesmente queria usar magia de Harry Potter, e acredito que ele tá escrevendo isso pra se divertir, é enquanto ele estiver se divertido, espero que ele continue por que tô adorando isso aqui.
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I couldn't keep reading. The Mc is extremely disgusting 😑. 1.- The author does not take into account the background that he gives in the first chapters (he was a genius, betrayed by his family and girlfriend) 2.-extremely unpleasant internal monologues and a character with TDHA. 3.- If he is a reincarnated adult, why does he behave like a 6-year-old child? (I don't get it) The author gives as background an older man who has been through many experiences, so why bother giving him that background. 4.-The magical world doesn't make much sense, huge plot holes. 5.- Excessive trust with his new family (he was betrayed in his life, then why trust blindly again). One would think that the MC would be more careful in this new opportunity but no... Anyway, there are more reasons but I won't bother to write them. I must say that the writing quality is not bad and that the chapters come out periodically.