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The Soccer/football System

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3.94 (14 เรตติ้ง)

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Follow Adam Strong on his journey to become the (Greatest Of All Time) in the soccer world. He travels back to a time in his past where
opportunity abounds.

Access to a system capable of propelling him to greater heights is just the icing on the cake.

From a nobody he relentlessly pursues his goal of becoming the greatest sportsman the world has ever seen...

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KEARIS

"author", aren't you ashamed to completely copy "G.O.A.T" by Mujunel_the_Mystic? why didn't you distance yourself from the "main" story. I did not like this work while reading Chapter 8, I am far from being as evil as I appear in this review, but what the "author" did is beyond any description of the adequacy of the judgment about CTRL+C CTRL+V. I don't mind the GOAT system, because the main author made a really good and high-quality system structure. I'm giving an average grade because you have some developments, but they are too small compared to what-cannot-be-called. grammar is lame in the way of the whole narrative. I hope the author will correct himself and make a work worthy of being considered "ctrl c ctrl v"

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1yr
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bythgr
LV 14 Badge

I really love football novels and ffs but this one is just a copy cat of the novel “The GOAT” I tried but It is not for me best of luck!

2yr
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TOS
LV 4 Badge

I like this novel. It has a great idea behind it. However, too many grammatical mistakes hinder the reader's immersion. I'll still give it a five-star rating, but I suggest you start using Grammarly when writing. It will help you a lot.

2yr
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OnlyGoodStuff_1

I love this novel so much the detail and the football matches so much excitement I really recommend this sports novel

2yr
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Kaz0
LV 13 Badge

Seriously, I was originally excited but all of this is just basically a whitewashed version of G.O.A.T, no shade but the lack of originality and the fact that ur not even trying to add ur own twist to ur work is just sad. Even the first elixirs he got is the same as the other novel. I hope ur new chapters won't be more copy pasted/paraphrased stuff.

1yr
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Robert_Siri

Finally a soccer novel for Americans I feel like this has a chance to be a top novel just keep releasing and will all support you

2yr
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DaoistDqbfzC

If you are reading this now I would recommend you read G.O.A.T by Munjunel_the_Mystic. It’s on here and on WebNovel. Everything about this is a copy of Mystics story so if you really do enjoy this one then you would really love G.O.A.T as it is better and has 500+ chapters.

1yr
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MarinXGrayfia

It's the same as GOAT novel except the MC but author is the same type - late post chapter and just post randomly q

1yr
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Solo_10

Rare to get a Football novel that's this awesome

1yr
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TommyTinit

awesome really recommend this novel If you love sports and soccer/football [img=recommend]

2yr
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TMC_VII

******football [img=fp]mnnngg

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2yr
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GoodGuy_123

Although it’ okay to copy the concept and stuff but at least change the dialogues

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TommyTinit

love the story it's a one in a million sports story really recommend if you like football

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2yr
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FlamekinF

awesome football story really like the start and to be honest I don't really care if it's a copy of not so keep it up

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1yr
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