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The Secret Job of The Loner

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นักเขียน: Arkalphaze

4.76 (17 เรตติ้ง)

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I'm Dropping This Guys, I realized I made the pacing very bad, and I believe that this should be a better piecewiht a better writing. I'm going to rewrite it together with the novel the king of Tricks and Magic later on. Sorry for disappointing you guys.

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    LoveElvenButt

    Now this is an interesting one. we need more novels with the kinds of these more lately with the overnumbered novels of systems and other normall overrated stuff

    4mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    SimpSiregar

    A very interesting premise of someone with three livess. So recommendedd let's goo more chapters a day pleaseee!!! Come on let's gooo!! Ray Lance the black general!!!

    3mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Elixabeth_III

    This one's very interesting indeed!! It's like I'm watching a combination of my teenage comedy SNAFU, nurarihyon, and Noragami all into one single novel!!! Please update more pleaseeee

    3mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    MilaStorySeeker

    MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    BookWanderer

    LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!! LET'S GOO THIS IS GOOD!!

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Reonard17

    IT GET PREMIUM TOO FAST! You should have made the premium more slower. It was getting more interesting later on, and you should have made premium there. That's all for me, overall VERY PROMISING

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    JimmyTheCactus

    This is an interesting and captivating blend of slice of life with the spices of Yokai and demons, Reincarnation, Modern Wizard Society, Detectives Mystery, and Highschool Romance! I would really like if the writing style got more neat and easy to follow, but overall, I'm very interested.

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    UchihaWilliam

    KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!! KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!!

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    DeathAzeroth

    Gotta love the Yokai stuff things. It's much more interesting than just normal troupes, I love how it has the theme of a slice of life to give a picture of the adapting life of him in the modern love

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    MindMister

    NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT!

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Xiaolingsokkah

    THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT! THIS IS GREAT!

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    LoveKimya

    A very potential one indeed, but I"m slightly confused with your writing, and it went premium real fast! But I still love it lol X) Please continue it, it seems like a beautiful piece

    4mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    sennun
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    Stop lying 🤥 how is he a loner when he has a harem of “girlfriends” cliche template?, Has slaves and a boss?

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    3mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Artrea09

    Might want to pace the things up a little it. but the premise is promising, and the characters are interesting and very alive. But it could be improved. I'm going to read this thoroughly for now. Good luck, author

    5mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    KillerDevilKnight

    Go on!! INto the nex one~~~ Well I'm not usually a fan of a highschool story, but this seems to be very promising! But it seems that this is going to be quite heavy

    5mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Seniletrump

    NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! NEXT!

    5mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    TinyAriel

    Got a huge potential, but reeks of Japanese light novel's reference here. Hope there are less cliches inside it since it's kind of annoying, but still, I'm cheering you!

    5mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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