/ Fantasy / The Paradox of Emperal
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Born into a world that deemed him powerless, Emperal was cursed to remain motionless, trapped in a body that refused to move. The world saw him as fragile—a broken soul fated to lie in bed forever. But what they couldn't know, what they never could have imagined, was that from the moment of his birth, Emperal awakened an ability so extraordinary, it shattered the boundaries of what was possible.
He could move the world with a mere thought. Not just simple telekinesis, but with the kind of precision and mastery that could make mountains shift and oceans churn. A power that, for all its glory, came at a crushing cost.
For every motion he commanded, his own body grew weaker. Every ounce of energy poured into shaping the world around him drained his life force, until he was left even more immobile than before. Worse yet, his power could never lift him—no matter how immense it became, he remained bound to his bed, a prisoner of his own extraordinary curse.
For years, Emperal was trapped in this cruel paradox: capable of shaping the world, but incapable of even moving a finger. His strength was his prison. His power, his torment.
But even in the depths of despair, his mind remained sharp. Watching. Waiting. Plotting.
Then, on a day the world thought nothing of, Emperal made a choice. A choice that would shatter the very fabric of fate. With a single thought, he chose to end it all—not out of surrender, but as the first step toward rewriting his destiny.
Because sometimes, the end isn’t truly an end. It’s the beginning of something far darker, far more dangerous.
For when Emperal finally rose, it wasn’t as a savior or a victim, but as a force so unrelenting, so vengeful, that the world itself would tremble. Bound no longer by his frail body, he would wield his curse like a blade—and carve his name into existence itself.
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wicked and shrewd heroes are just my type. i even like the paradox. it keep the MC overpowerful but with a fatal weakness. i am entranced by the flow of the story and could not wait to see where it would go. good luck author.
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charechter development- pretty good world building- very detailed and i mean it mc personality- personally i think its kainda unique this a hella nice read please author dont over work your self
Based on what I've seen, it's quite interesting but there's an issue. The writing style is too formal for me and makes the chapter less flexible and engaging. Maybe you could reduce the formality but that's just my opinion. Aside that, everything is good, the MC is growing and developing. I love it! Give it a quick read, it's not a bore.
Really like your story , please keep it updated but one thing i found is that everything is described in minute details. Maybe that can be avoided just my POV...
good start author, the MC looks amazing, especially his powers, but the best thing I liked about your work is the detailing of scenes which hooked me up. I highly recommend this book especially to those who like dark fantasy settings.
Looks good the info was nice. Overall its a nuce novel, I think. This webnovel has a knack of grabbing you by the collar and showing you how good it is.
Compelling beginning. The characterization and flow of the story gave a sense of immersion. Fun to read and not boring. This book had a lot of potential. Love to read more.
Very interesting opening story, very isekai'ish MC set up, I do like the twist of the MC not being killed by accident or murdered by says muggers/robbers trying to say young women (Glad he avoided that tiered old anime troupe). I like the contrast between the MC's brutality and his side-kicks comedy (The Hippo). I also like that he went with a hippo instead of the obvious choice of a pig. The power up mechanic is different enough that it is not boring, even though the MC starts off in the new world somewhat OP. I look forward to more developement of the MC and additional companions. Just hope he scales back the power level some, as you really do not want to have the MC being "GOD Like" too quickly, as that may drive some readers away. Need steady progression with out falling into the same old Animesque troup (LIke Goku from DBS).
I like the story it has Great written characters i recommend to the others to read the characters are god written and designed all good luck to the writer of the novel.
It needs some adjustments that I hope author will fix up in the future. Keep a Auxiliary Volume: It would be resourcesful (1) Write Power System and new terms in it. (2) Use Author's notes: As reference for your readers to understand the novel more. I'd liked so far. I became a reader of this series and put it my library. I'd Point out errors in the future that author and readers find helpful.
The mc emperal gives me this sort of anti hero vibes.Even though he is like a villain, he's a enjoyable. I've been finding more Dark fantasy books to add to my collection and I just added this one.
Wow. first chapter got me hooked. And I like the structure of the first chapter. I recomend this book.