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A teen who died and was given the choice of living a grand life across the multiverse with whatever power he so wishes.... yet he chooses to be a ghost.
"Choosing broken powers? Psh I just wish to live my life as a simple Spirit that helps people while doing what I wish!"
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-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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A ghost mc yay. $)?$)&96:6664;’6/6@;777”.75””.585,8)”88),8”5;08,077 with djsjxnxnndndkxkdndjdndndkdkdjkdkxmdmdmmxmxmxmxmmxmxmxmxmxmmxmxmxmmxmxmxmx
Its a unique story that is quite interesting so give it a read! 👍 ..................................................................................
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yawn... after reading the summary, i expected spoiler-sensei but there are no spoilers and he simply likes his wells too much. spelling has the same mistakes (their and quite/quiet)
This is honestly amazing. The writing is very good with little to no grammar errors. The world background is fine, since it's a fanfic it doesn't need much work regardless.The story has been developing so good I'm honestly hooked. There is also great updating stability so far, the only thing is character design, but that isn't serious enough considering it's not needed in a fanfic as good as this. You don't really notice that there are little to no descriptions of the character.
Okay, so the first world he goes into he can't mess with the plot at all, now in Fairy Tail the plot is so far gone that it doesn't exist. I find it hard to care at all about the plot of the fanfiction when he's just thrust before extremely overpowered individuals and just strong-armed to do things for them. I started reading this as I thought it was gonna be like uncle Iroh and he was going to actually helped people and grow alongside his helping, but this has just been a disappointment the first 15 chapters are completely useless, and then with the fairy tail thing he's basically forced into being a slave for Marvis & Zeref, sugar-coated under the prefix of 'brother' of Wendy whom in the AU of Fairy Tail is the daughter of Marvis & Zeref. This brings me to another point of inconsistency, in which if she's the daughter of Marvis & Zeref how is it, she went through the time gate and has Grandeeny inside her? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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love it and pls DON'T DROP [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the fanfic, it's a weird and a interesting concept. kinda sad for the fact that Mc is ejected from rwby without any goodbyes or such the fanfic still has a few chapters so this rating can still change, which will probably wont. [I don't know how to write a proper review]
Just read this already. This is an amazing fanfiction. It features a guy who died and was reincarnated with 3 wishes. However, Instead of the generic 3 wishes used on powers and such, He used them on helping himself help others. I can continue going on and on but I'm just writing this review to give this story a higher star rating.
Interesting concept! Keep it up because I'm looking forward to how this story plays out. --------------------------------------------------------
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