The Fan Fiction Life of Kai (Reboot)

LV 6

Takskakashi

I did read the first novel before this reboot and it was okay also but need improvement. 5 star so far for this novel as I like the idea of you starting at Asgard. I really like the Superman being at Marvel, but my advice is to not put any DC characters anymore to your Marvel Universe to make it really unique. They're lots of character at Marvel which can match Superman. Bits & Bytes: Try NOT to only focus @ Marvel Group Characters E.g. Avengers - X-men - Fantastic Four where Movie already created. It's better to have the original X-men - URL: https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=sAkL2-vh2Sk

LV 6

HeartRend

Read your previous novel, loved everything about it except for one thing: getting into affairs or relations with a woman who is already in a relationship. I don't know how people see that as being fine, to me its just cheating, even if it's not the MC doing it. If those women broke off with their SO i understand, but there are literally soooooo many hot single women in the marvel universe, so why do you have to set Kai up with the taken ones?

LV 14

MamaMoBano_999

SEX IS GOOD FOR THR BODY SO LETS HAVE SEX! SEX IS GOOD FOR THR BODY SO LETS HAVE SEX SEX IS GOOD FOR THR BODY SO LETS HAVE SEX SEX IS GOOD FOR THR BODY SO LETS HAVE SEX SEX IS GOOD FOR THR BODY SO LETS HAVE SEX SEX IS GOOD FOR THR BODY SO LETS HAVE SEX

LV 4

Gerardo_Rivera

Basura en el trabajo de la recompensa de la recompensa de la oración por la mañana y el otro lugar que se muestra en la tarde y me dormí leyendo esto

LV 5

Wofl_Man

The first draft had grammar and vocabulary mistakes in nearly every sentence, all the females just fall in love with kal for no reason, the author feels the need to show kals character data like he he's in an rpg when nearly everyone knows superman's powers. It's just a mess of wasted potential. That's why I was so happy when I noticed that this story had been rebooted. The author has realized that his story sucks, and fixed the issues, and made it better. Except he didn't, I could barely get past chapter two, but from what I've read, it's the same story, just now it begins in Asgard. Characters still don't act like real people, and from what I read of the chapter titles, females don't either. 2/5 Don't read, it not worth your time.

LV 13

Xrvds

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LV 4

Kurosis

liked the story b4 the re-write. i feel that the mc is more beta where as first one was alpha. this mc "doesn't feel like showing off" which he eventually does cause y not... anyways thanks for writing.

LV 4

ieatkimchi

The fanfic novel is good but some mistakes are left. You just need to reread it and fix it. But hope you do more chapter and also please don't add random things like if your going to make the mc op then make him op not like your first one where as a character just popped out of no where and start beating the mc. Like you need to put more story into it and how they seem to know he there and why he beating the crap out of him or messing with him. Other then that I love it.

LV 6

linFan

Hey author when is this gonna be updated dudes can barely wait anymore hurry and come back bro I'm bored out of my mind right now And repeat Hey author when is this gonna be updated dudes can barely wait anymore hurry and come back bro I'm bored out of my mind right now

LV 6

4thEmperor

I gave 3 star But it's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it offit's good story Don't drop it off

LV 14

Dobrozlo

Very interesting, it looks like there will be other universes so it will be very interesting to read about adventures of superman...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 5

MarkOfLife

The story IS SO GOOD!! 5 STARTS for you. So Keep it up!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC, I LOVE THIS FANFIC The story is so good that i dont have anything to say, just do your thing. A readers Opinion or what he thinks will be great if included here: Like Including a bit of things like slice of life, interaction with other races and some others in the story, even if its little. Like the TENSEI SHITARA SLIME something. I dont know if others agree with me. But i think it will become great story. :)

LV 15

shaephet

I loved the first one and I’m happy you are rebooting it my only request is more updates and harem!!!!!!! ...................... !!!!!!!!!!!

LV 5

ZoVeRa

hmmm . i shall invest my ratings and spirits stones... hope the author dont flip this story away... his stories were good but due to small haters he always go nuts... too sad... need to level up his willpower n confident.. booom....

LV 5

Supergoodboy

Well, this is one of my several favorite original fan fiction novel, i was read this before reboot and i love the story and now i hope with this reboot the story will be much better than before!

LV 5

Otakusalem

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LV 11

EdwinTr

please come back is been 2 years already 😞 ..... .............. ... . . . .. . .. .. .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .