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In a world oblivious to its impending demise, littered with horrifying beasts and demons, What will happen when humanity's last hope, a powerful Divine System is given to a lazy and useless sixteen year old? Will he use it for what is intended(the death of all demons) or will he sleep through earth's destruction?
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This is actually my very first book so I would really appreciate some love, if you have some ideas about my story or corrections, Comment it and let me know, also please vote for me I'll be dropping some mad content, next chapter has over 2000 word ls I'll be out in the next 10 hours, thanks. Much love ; ).
this book is interesting and so is the MC's behaviour so am giving it 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
😂😂😂😂 Just reading the first chapter got me giggling like an idiot. What got me all cracked up was his desires to eat pork cutlet!😂 You're doing really good author. I'll add this to my shelf and continue reading. Wishing you success in your journey to the world of Authors 💖
This is book is good very well written it's hard to believe it's your first time but I guess we're similar lol and I love your MC because I can relate to him 😂 very funny and entertaining
The story was very engaging! The author has a really strong foundation for their characters and a strong storyline. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work!
This is amazing, the first chapter brought me back to my birthday, just five months ago when I battling depression, this character is relatable, the writer took my dark thoughts and turned them into humor and I am here for it! Can't wait to read more, I love this.
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Damien's love for pork is quite comical. I think for that alone I'll keep reading 🤣🤣 But honestly this is a really good read! I'm truly impressed and highly recommend
This was brilliant, and the MC's undenying love for pork really makes me like it a lot. It's really hilarious, no doubt. 😂😂😂 This is beautiful and the execution is amazing. Keep it up author😊
hat was insane. I might have trouble sleeping for a few days. Wao I love it. post most chapters I am waiting and you got a new reader. being a horror story writer, I really appreciate your efforts.
I can't tell much about the story since author has only posted one chapter but what catch my attention was writing style. It was a great mix of tension and comedy in the first chapter which made open easy and fun to read. Overall I'll add it in my library since I'm curious to know story development Great job author ✨
So far this story is really nice, it made me laugh at some parts and the character is someone that I can see myself looking forward to his development. [img=update] I need to read up to 30 chapters to make up my mind on being consistent.
I really do love this book and the writer way of presenting humor in a novel, Totally nailed it 👍 .. The first chapter alone got me laughing my eyes out😅😅
Interesting, great mix up of comedy and mystery. I enjoy the fact that almost all the chapters so far has something to make one laugh, expecting more chapters.
I'm excited to see how this turns out!!! Way to go author😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃
I liked the mix of humor and action, makes the story quite enjoyable to read. Quite keen to find out why Damien is so lazy and what might happen to his future. Now I really feel like eating pork cutlet…and looking forward to more chapters soon!
Welcome back author, I was really starting to miss Damien. Hope you feel better now, so that you can continue to give us amazing content. My love for Damien keeps on growing Love ya... Damien 😂😂😂
The story is quite fun to read. The main character is relatable and the world-building is great. I love the humor in chapter 1. Keep up the good work, author.
This story's got a great start and how the author delivered the comedy is very much impressive! I love how hilarious Damien sounds He really sounds like a lazy as* 16-year-old which makes him really likeable 🤣💖 The way the author progresses the story is also great It's quite fast-paced which suits my taste a lot Keep up the good work, author! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! 👍💖
what an awesome story, I totally loved it. The plot, characters everything is described beautifully, I'll be reading this one till the end, great job author 👍❤️
It is a quite good read......the humour is amazing and a beautifully written book. The world define and characters are phenomenal........keep it up author.