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0.75% The Carnation Goddess / Chapter 1: Grand Sage Saint Shen Lie (R18)

บท 1: Grand Sage Saint Shen Lie (R18)

The Fenghua Great Continent is the biggest divine realm in this part of the world and there are numerous powerful cultivators in the land.

Of course, the three most powerful and biggest cultivation celestial powers in Fenghua Great Continent are the Saintess Palace, the Snow Flora Pavilion and the Holy Ascension Citadel.

Shen Lie was once the strongest cultivator in the entire Fenghua Great Continent and he had reached the cultivation realm of the Grand Sage Saint. In fact, you can say that he was the originator of all the Dao in the world.

When he was creating the mythical Carnation Goddess Painting, he had gathered the seven most beautiful maidens in the entire divine realm. Then he had made them into his 7 saintesses so that they could help him to complete his greatest cultivation master piece the Carnation Goddess Painting.

In order to complete this painting, these 7 saintesses must be able to display their lewdest and most compromising naked positions for him to admire their peerless beauty.

And from there, he would select 1 of the 7 saintesses to be his ultimate Carnation Goddess.

Needless to say, he was still too young and simple at that time and during his act of creations with them, they had set upon his nakedness and had mortally wounded him.

Although he had managed to escape with his Carnation Goddess Painting, his cultivation core was ruined by them and he had lost everything except for his Carnation Goddess Painting.

These 7 saintesses soon divided his cultivation resources into 7 cultivation holy lands, controlling hundreds of cultivation sects in each of their holy lands.

As for Shen Lie, he was naturally left for dead.

But how could a lofty figure like Shen Lie just perished in this manner?

He was the originator of all the Dao, so he could naturally find a way to repair his ruined cultivation again.

Naturally after he had repaired his cultivation core for 100 years, he was now on a path of vengeance against these 7 saintesses and to complete his Carnation Goddess Painting.

Today Shen Lie was on his way to the Holy Maiden Sanctuary, the weakest holy land of the 7 saintesses.

As he walked through the mountains of the Holy Maiden Sanctuary, he soon encountered a most beautiful maiden with some seniority.

This beautiful maiden was actually Hua Zixia and she was ranked among the top 30 beauties in Fenghua Great Continent.

Hua Zixia was immediately curious when she saw him and asked softly, "Where do you think you are going?"

Shen Lie was pleasantly surprised to see such a astonishing beautiful maiden in this mountainous wilderness so he answered with a gentle smile, "I am going to the Holy Maiden Sanctuary to cultivate."

Hua Zixia shook her head, "You shouldn't go there. Male cultivators have a lower status in the Holy Maiden Sanctuary. You should go to the other cultivation sects."

Shen Lie actually did not know this.

It was because he had spent the past 100 years to recover to his peak strength in some forsaken mountains and when he had completed his reclusion, he had randomly asked a low level cultivator where the 7 saintesses are now and he was told that the Holy Maiden Sanctuary was the nearest holy land that one of the 7 saintesses has established.

Shen Lie smiled, "I am Shen Lie and I will like to try my luck. What is your name?"

Hua Zixia saw that this man was really handsome and had an out-of-the world demeanor. So, she was curious and amicable at the same time, "I am Hua Zixia and I am actually an elder of the Holy Maiden Sanctuary. The exams to be an outer court protégés of the Holy Maiden Sanctuary is actually stricter than you think. Without a good cultivation base, you won't even have a chance to enter the holy land."

She ended up telling him more than she was supposed to, because men were insignificant in the Holy Maiden Sanctuary. But this man seems a little special.

Shen Lie smiled with a sense of good humor, "Isn't this good anyway? Then we can travel together to this Holy Maiden Sanctuary."

Strangely, she felt herself saying. "Um, why not? I am traveling alone anyway and it is always good for some company."

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This company was not what Hua Zixia had thought and she did not even know what had happened.

They were just walking peacefully when Shen Lie was embracing her. Soon he was fondling all over her and he had loosened her belt before putting her down slowly on the ground.

She did protest by saying feebly, "Shen Lie, what are you doing…"

He just said, "The way that you have swayed your body is just too hot for me to bear. You are more beautiful when you are naked..."

Then her robe had slipped down by him and even her skirt was tossed away far away, leaving leaving only a white panties and an undies top.

But Shen Lie was soon playing with the thin undies top and he had lifted it up to play with her beautiful perked white breasts.

Hua Zixia flushed from awkwardness when she saw that her full tender breasts were being exposed to the eyes of this man…

"Alas, so big and wonderful." Shen Lie eyed her breasts greedily.

Hua Zixia had wanted to struggle but she saw that her thin white panties were wet and she was leaking her mountain spring as Shen Lie began to fondle her comfortably from below.

When Shen Lie had finally pulled down her thin white panties, a streak of her sticky nectar could be seen dripping.

And Hua Zixia was shaking with uncontrollable strong lusts even though she was feebly trying to resist him.

Before long, she was now lying naked in the wilderness and all her clothing had been removed by Shen Lie, exposing her ample white bouncing bosoms in front of a stranger that she had only met today.

She was tightly clenching her white teeth and a faint blush had appeared on her beautiful charming face as Shen Lie was fondling all over her and he was playing with her two ample erected pink nipples.

He was looking at her most forbidden bud while praising, "What cute little forest on top. What a beautiful pink and it is a like small pink bud."

He had suddenly flipped opened her dripping wet bud to examine her, "Alas, you are still a chaste maiden…"

She was completely immersing in the poison of lust and could not extricate herself.

Before long, her soft cries gradually sounded and she was copulating with Shen Lie in various positions. She kept changing positions to meet his violent thrusts as she hugged his strong body tightly.

Her tender moans began to resound in the wilderness.

She felt like a weak but lovely bitch as she endured Shen Lie's excitement and adultery from inserting her flower path from behind. Her slender waist and soft buttocks were pressing hard against his crotch, allowing his strong little brother to penetrate deeper and brought a greater sense of pleasure as her chastity was completely broken by him.

When both of them reached the climax of excitement, Shen Lie began to hug her delicate body tightly and she could still feel his crotch moving forward desperately below her soft bottom, throbbing and erupting, spraying hotly violently inside her.

Just as she had thought that this was over, he had suddenly withdrawn from her little sister and had spread widely her leg and into her other forbidden land.

"This is…"

Hua Zixia was suddenly shedding tears as her asshole was broken into and she was moaning in a low voice. This was another pleasure and it caused her to be dizzy and intoxicated.

After a while, she could feel intense spasms in her second holy land by Shen Lie and she had received it by spurting up more of her spring water and nectars.

When Shen Lie was done, there was glistering tears that kept flowing from her eyes and she did not know if this was tears of pain or tears of happiness.

But she only knew this: that she, a ranked great beauty that is in the top 30 most beautiful maidens list has been taken by a complete unknown stranger today and she is doing this out of her own free will.

Sensing her embarrassment, Shen Lie smiled and stuffed his finger into her second holy land. Before she knew what was happening, he had taken out his fingers and had stuffed it into her small cherry mouth to let her suck with her tender mouth.

She was startled: This isn't over yet?

Shen Lie had suddenly pulled her head over his little brother by stuffing his little brother into her small cherry mouth, "Don't stop until I've said so."

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4. Please be wary that this is a comedy R18 exotic cultivation story and is written for fun. If you dont want the R18, please avoid this work. There's no NTR or Yuri. 

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