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The Bet

Urban 14 ตอน 84.6K จำนวนคนดู
นักเขียน: Jo_J

4.72 (136 เรตติ้ง)

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The story moved to:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-bet_20161539905271805
Another story written by me:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/anemones_20040643706911505

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outpost76

While I'm not a fan of this type of stories but I enjoyed this one. I like how slow it is, it goes well with the bet they have deal with in a year. It gives a lot of time for many things to happen and I'll admit I'm a little curious about it. I don't know if the author knows that much about European history or you had to research it but it's a pretty good inclusion in the story. The writing quality is great and aside from minor mistakes in spelling or grammar I can't say much about it. Overall it's a great read

4yr
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Vidit_Verma

Awesome Book !!! The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SeverusMagicus

The story line is great, characters and the events are well written. The details of the story are outstanding. You should have a look to that novel if you like romance genre.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Nickaido

Great story, I'm not fan of this genre but I like your Story, it has lot of potential. The only thing I can say I don't like would be how shorter some chapters are. We need a lot of chapters asap. Good chance and keep up. I've sent few stones as encouragement. More, more chapters..

4yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Izmi_Gea

GREAT, I was wondering who Jo Jo will pick up or how the author will continue to develop the story, it makes me curious and can not wait for the next chapter as each chapter continue to draw me in[img=recommend]

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ssfx3yuchens

ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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cherlyswan

I enjoyed reading the story very much. It's a slow burn. Totally worth it. I love how everything started with just a few people getting drunk reminds me of why I should stay away from alcohol😆

4yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Amateur_Author

The story seems fun. What i really liked about was there is a part of it which i could relate to. Trying to be perfect all the time. The Author has narrated the story in a way that any one connect to it easily. Nice work Author.👍

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CoolForniteplayer

The concept is unique and one of a kind, I must say. The story plot is different compared to all the novels on this platform. I am hoping to see many chapters in the future. Cheers! Happy writing!

4yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Tangent34

Hey dear Author! Your story itself with the name is quite enticing. The story seems fun and in the end with the chapters, I felt being quite hooked, The pacing of the story is well and I wish the author all the best for the work!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Khawla_Amini

I love everything about this book, the plot, the characters,the idea .. Exactly everything, can't help but wait for the next chapter [img=update]

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Arba
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You know what you want to write, but the issue is grammar and incomplete sentences. I think you publish without editing them? Write and post? That's totally fine, but sometimes reading your story out loud helps with editing. If it doesn't roll off the tongue smoothly, then change it. Besides that, I think you're good. The idea and the thought are there for the readers to recreate and reimagine. Just keep writing and you'll improve. I was like you when I started since English wasn't my native language. Good luck to you!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Chantielu

I like how the plot line of the novel. From the first few paragraphs the reader was able to see the promise of the promise and what is expected in the rest of the novel. Not many writers do that here. So, I'm impressed. Great story.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
goldenchild725

The characters are adorable. Both Jo and Matthew are really cute, and they do seem to act like a couple already. The story development is really good. It's not too slow, but it's not fast either. The writing quality is good. I do feel there can be improvements though. Some of the sentences feel a little awkward when reading. Overall, I do like the story, despite romances not really being my cup of tea.

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sailow_Sanchez

Be honest, don't you get annoyed by the annoying cliche reviews. 'great story' 'amazing characters' bwaaaah. Those suck for me. Any who, [img=update]. I like your story so you get a vote. if I could gift you I could, but I'll keep reading and I'll you can expect a gift from me. Fan's should let consistent voting do the reviewing[img=recommend] P.S. I'm in love with your characters.

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
yu_tanit

Well, I don't usually read the story with this genre but this story seems interesting. I like the flow of the story and the way the author has introduced the character. Keep up the good work author.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Resurgent

This novel is impressive. It has a very engaging writing style. Also the story line appears to be fascinating too. Character interactions have been portrayed very nicely. And the FL was fun to read including other characters. Keep up the good work author!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
JustLetMeSleep

to be honest i have grown a tad bit dull on romances since many stories died because of it, but this is actually pretty darn good the start got me a good laugh.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Song_Shinyi

I like the story... It is well written and easy to understand. It makes me want to travel to all those wonderful places... If you could change the synopsis and make it something more interesting, I'm sure your book will get more reviews !! My honest review - I very much liked it... And I want to continue with the reading... Please continue with your updates :) :) Good Luck !! :)

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Chaos_Swan_king

At first, I wasn't sure where this was going but as I kept on reading, I found myself very much interested. Well thought out and put together. Definitely give it a shot.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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