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Vishal is a hitman who takes government contracts to hunt down heinous criminals to keep innocents safe. While on a contract he gets killed by underground mafia. In the divine space he meets an entity who asks him to enter the dc universe and clean the filth with a system. He accepts easily because he is angry at the incompetence of heroes and justice system in dc. Thus begins his anti hero and a business journey.
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So he is a government agent Who kills people And criminals it's his job in real world And he has time to read DC comics And be angry 😡 at fictional villains and heros In a comic Bro like what is this
Good idea but it could be better, the details are left out a lot, he simply earned billions coz he wanted to, changed Gotham coz he wanted to, that is no way realistic considering Gotham's elite would definitely interfere, no to mention his rise to the top using magic and his business IQ would have been an epic arc to read about, character personalities also are far different from usual.
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The mc is a hypocrite, he let's innocent people die for his own agenda after yapping about how bad other heroes are, he does many good things and all that but he seems to be against all of the GCPD for no real reason besides their corruption as if that was a reason all of them deserved death
I can't say I like it. The story is a self insert from what I got from it, most the chapters I read (I've read up to chapter 6) are just him insulting police or a hero. We don't actually see any development of his powers. IDK why he has a system as normally they are used to track progress but as we don't see any of the progress he probably cpuld just take it out the story so that he doesn't have the double wish at the start. Other issues.No world building. No character development (that isn't instant).Inaccurate characters (they said they were on earth 22). Character manipulates his dads mind.Gets innocents killed by chapter 4 intentionally.Can't think of anything I like about it.
It's a half decent story.The world and the aspects of the world the author includes makes it worth a read. The author includes quite alot of aspects from dc comics into his story which other authors either neglect or cant be bothered to add.This is one of the main positives of this fanfic. Including good plot points from the comics.The things that make the good less apparent is the obvious hatred the author has for dc heroes. While it fits to a certain degree due to the moral compass of the mc, it goes too far at certain points.By this I mean the mc constantly calling wonder woman a 'sl*t' over and over again.I wouldn't find fault in this if it wasn't for the fact that the mc never justified him saying this and the fact that at some point all the mc has been talking about is how he wants to have multiple wives.To hammer in the point that he really wants multiple wives the author kills half the male population as a plot point in order for countries world wide to allow men to marry multiple women. Literally out of nowhere as the mc was in another dimension when it happened.And while the grammar isnt mtl level of bad it gets worse over time. By this I mean that while you can see some faults through the first maybe 40 chapters, after some point it becomes dribble. Still not horrible, but enough to where it feels like a child wrote the story.An example of this would be when the mc says things to the effect of " you have a bad mustache" while fighting sinestro. It wouldn't have been bad if he didn't say it over and over again on repeat in contiuously worse grammar sometimes saying it 3 times in the same sentance. But thats just being nitpicking on my part.All in all its mediocre, its worth a read if you have nothing else to read. Or if you like fanfics where the mc kills.p.s. the author really should add the romance and harem tag if you're gonna add it to the story. Especially with how the mc will most likely go to the marvel universe after some dc arcs
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A complete waist of time -Talking System -Hypocritical MC -MC has no brain whatsoever -Nonsensic multiverse “final boss” -MC doesnt use his powers creatively AT ALL -MC doesnt even have to learn how to use his powers -DC characters acting nothing like they should -Author uses “MC getting kidnapped/arrested” trope 4 times and only the first one worked, the rest are delusionaly bad In every story the author has to make a bit of believability for the readers to get hooked, the author has a tad bit of that such as when he makes the vigilante personas form named V (like vendetta) and gives him a quirky and fun personality but that gets stripped away immediately. Aside from that, the rest of the story is boring, tropey, and lacking in creativity. I do believe that the author may have some potential, but he has a long way to go.
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"Blaaaaaghh. Superman, God's righteous man. Thinks he can have peace without war. You know...
I like the part where he beat the entire Bat-family and Justice League to a pulp also good Job on pointing out to them their HYPOCRISY, It's what i hate most about the DC universe. Though, I would have liked for the MC to his character growth to be more clear and precise, I just can't believe he felt he belonged in that universe the second he arrived. Some people would treat their world like a video game or a simulation detached from reality, treating everyone like they're not real. All in all KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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Not bad. I wouldn’t say it’s one of the best fanfics I’ve read but it is something you can use to pass the time if you have nothing else going on👍
You know, this story isn't bad. Sure, I saw a few grammar errors, but besides that, not much else. Good job. Keep up the good work Author!
A very good story with lot of éléments of dc, not only the movies. Yep i like it very much.[img=update]😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
A talking system automatically caused my score to drop by 2 points. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .