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After the 28th world martial arts tournament and Goku leaving to train uub, Bulma invited everybody back to her's to celebrate. all goes well until Goten starts playing around with an old-time machine and ends up in the past on the planet Vegeta. How will Goten adapt to survive the saiyan home planet, will he find his way home or will he make one there? Goten/oc a little later on.
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The idea of sending Goten to the past is simply amazing so far it's all well and good. There were some moments when I thought that the character of Goten was acting very spoiled and naive. like I know King vegeta may not be the best person but his conversation with led me to think that only because he had power, he was acting very cocky... but that also shows that is his true character :) Anyway Goten now has a chance to come out from the shadow of his father and brother. literally Goten has gotten no spotlight so far in the series... at least that what I was think. Now Goten can show his true potential and his REAL character to us through the author. You are doing a great job although Goten getting and been attracted to girls so easily is not really my cup of tea. Well best of luck for me :)
Ok ok you got my interest plus gohan is going to get some Recognition he deserves. N a Quick question are you going to continue the bones of Ice 🧊 novel cause i dont want to keep my hopes up.
Really nice work up till now, hope to see more. ignore just go fill up word limit ignore just go fill up word limit ignore just go fill up word limit