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reincarnated in tensura as an op being 350 yrs before Canon.
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Good novel but its begin is somehow the same as the rest not really unique but has a nice storyline which makes u want to read more hi there I was wondering if you could send some pictures of Ultimate skill set and I will be there at SMAK got the job at least you have a good education and experience letter and resume for the post of assistant professor and I will believe it was real good at least you can do it
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this Fanfic Is Good So far I like it Countinue The Fanfic I want to see what happend when The "Cannon" Start Also the Frist Harem Need Atleast have 1 Ultimate Skill So not To Powerful to MC but also Not to Weak Like Regular Slime ( Not rimuru)
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I only ask that you keep trying, don't let the writing fall, it may be that at certain times you get stressed and the comments won't help, at some point you're going to screw it up, but keep trying, every effort pays off. I have seen very few tension fan fiction tension fan fiction, of which I can rescue very little, but you should always try to improve and give surprises, plot twists and those things, or the reading can become boring and super monotonous. And as I have been saying, do your best and I wish you the best (I don't know how well this is translated since I speak Spanish)
It Seems cool based on the chapters that are currently out. Please dont weaken him randomly or make him be a hero that saves everyone he can. Love it so far though
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