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Teen Mage in Teen Wolf

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นักเขียน: Quade_The_Unknown

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A teenage boy moves into a relatively small Californian town alongside his mom and younger sister.

His name is very unique: Myrddin Wyllt.

Moving around from place to place isn’t anything new to the Wyllt family. Spending anywhere from a week to a year in a single place.

Myrddin arrives at his new home at the age of 15, the end of summer 2010. This will be the start of his first year of highschool. And he might be able to finish a year of school at a single school for a change, but neither he nor his sister are holding their breath. They both attended 5 schools in different states to finish a grade in the past.

He has a good relationship with his mom. An ok relationship with his dad. And a decent relationship to his sister. Decent being an extremely nice and exaggerated way of putting it.

He is just a normal kid wanting to have something break the mundaneness of his life. Moving doesn’t help, it only makes it worse. At least his name is very unique, but it causes more trouble than it’s worth.

What happens when his mundane life gets cast to the wind? How will he adapt to his ever-changing view of the world? Will he finally be able to make some true friends? And how will he shape the future for not only himself, but possibly the entirety of Beacon Hills or the whole world?

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This will start a bit slow as I try and get the story started and get certain events sprinkled in before the main plot starts.

The timeline for Teen Wolf is an absolute mess, so there will be some changes to how things go in sequence. I’ll try to stick to how events went in the original, but there just isn’t information on some. An example would be that Laura Hale will still be dead, but it’s not said how long she was dead until her body was found. Or how long it took Derek to get back to Beacon Hill. Obviously things will change with an OC in the mix, but certain events will still happen and some won’t happen. It’s hard to explain this, so just enjoy reading it.

Along with Teen Wolfs supernatural creatures there will be others added in as well. Some examples that may or may not be included are: phoenix, dragon, unicorn, centaur, fairy, devil, demon, angel, etc…

As a heads up:
Myrdinn won’t know anything magic related at the start. He would only have an average person’s knowledge of it and only believe it to be fiction. He also doesn’t even know about the supernatural side of the world.

Another Heads Up:
Myrddin will start weak and become stronger. He will start relatively small but there will be something later on that will change him so we can get our 6’ athletic man. I’ll do my best to make it not seem forced but I haven’t written that far yet. (Think of Captain America how he went from weak to absolutely buff, but our MC won’t be looking that buff)

The romance partner has not been decided upon at the moment of writing this terrible synopsis.

(I promise this fanfic will be written better than this random thing)

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Everyone knows I don’t own anything related to Teen Wolf or MTV related. And if I did I likely wouldn’t be writing this.

I hope you can turn your brain off and enjoy reading this fanfic!

Please comment! And point out any plot inconsistencies for me, I’m human so there’s bound to be something I’ll forget! Or tell me what you enjoy and don’t enjoy so I know what everyone is reading this for!

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Andrew_Alsbrooks

you are a great writer I think this story is great but even Scott was only a loser for half an episode are you trying to make a villain or a main character a main character her that has no friends or even true loved ones because your leading to him being adopted right the dad is distant the mom overbearing and possibly the only really supportive relationship he has since Erica Scott stiles all just pity him you've made a character that's in far succeeds his eq maybe that is a little harsh but honestly ur giving him the social life of a school shooter all you need is Lydia or Jackson to run over the coyote and he becomes a serial killer

2yr
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Quade_The_Unknown

Cheeky self-review from the author (Doing this so this fanfic will show up in the rankings) I like how this is shaping up. I’m not the smartest person alive, so trying to write an MC that is very smart is a bit difficult. And please comment. It gives me some ideas and causes me to think more in-depth about things I might otherwise not. It also makes my day when people comment on my works

2yr
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CopyPaste1

the idea was good the grammar was good but sadly the whole weak nerdy kid who get punched in the first day with no reason was just fooking cringe. No seriously the whole interaction of Mc with people and animals is really awkward and some times annoying. Mc just trying to talk smart and funny almost every time with no reason,he can not interact like normal human and is funny how he supposed to be a awkward kid with no friends.but when meet somone he is trying to be a smartass with no reason. i could read only 6.5 chapters and believe me half of them i wanted to dropped it. The story maybe is really good but the way Mc is around People is just plain annoying for me. Give it a try, maybe you like it!

2yr
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BASTILLE

I decided to do this review because i expected much more from this fanfic(chapter 11 currently). Very boring reading so far, only thing keeping me from leaving was the mc’s glow up that doesn’t even have a set time to happen. Mc is brave but also very weak(like literally the weakest). Carachters are all anoying including lydia. The moment with the with carval are unreadable(they amount to 3chapters or so) and i just had to skip all of it. Good parts are the perfect grammar And world background the author has built. Sorry for the rant i guess this work just Isn’t for me. For the ones who read this review, don’t get discoraged and give it a try(at least 5 chapter) from there you can tell if you will like it or not.

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2yr
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Dary_Dary

honestly the story is not bad but the MC basically the same thing as most hero stories where he is that typical geek cliché very smart but ridiculously weak physically and he suddenly gains super powers in the case of the MC he got taller and stronger speechless he ends up being able to use magic honestly one of the only weaknesses of a mage in almost every stories and that they are physically weak but the MC is basically a super soldier with magic but even with all that the story is not bad it's just not the type I like to read

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2yr
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KsAR502
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2yr
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_Medeiros

I honestly don't have much to say I just think this story is bad [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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LittleBoyDeath

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2yr
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XGamesSH

Honestly, I really do like this fan-fic. Writing quality is good (not that I really looked for grammatical mistakes). Interesting MC, curious how his character will evolve. Naturally, I like the Story Development because i'm a big fan of the tv series teen wolf. The only question I have is if there is like a set time for updated chapters? if so, what are those times? ps: correct me if I made a grammatical mistake because I wanne better my English.

2yr
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JayCooper

The appearance MC reminds me of Presto, a character from an old cartoon called dungeons and dragons which in my country became known as dragon cave

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2yr
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IWant2DieALilMore

more please it has been a month it has been 4 weeks it has been 28 days when will we get more chapters !? ..

2yr
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HolyDogOx

Really like the story so far and I hope this hasn’t been dropped! . . . . Also really looking forward to when Malia Turns back into a human!

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2yr
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Shikaku_sama

Where the update’s??? Been waiting for awhile[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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2yr
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PinnacleExistence

one of the best teen Wolf ff on wn.. just the oc is great, author does a great job at portraying the world.. the mc has personality, the characters are what you could expect them to be and progress is just on point..

2yr
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Neemias_Augusto

I dont speak english but this fanfic is good 👍👍👍 ...................................................................................................... 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍

2yr
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mystery889

Great writing quality some small errors you wouldn’t be bothered by but story seems great I like that it started before cannon and how it’s not zooming into story or powers like that I just hope that the updates stay consistent

2yr
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KuroiSenkoGr

This fic is the quality I expect from fanfic.net, not this site its a nice change of pace I loved its awesome character development and especially how the author made us learn about the oc/mc and showed us his feelings by his actions and his character development so far instead of just force-feeding bs like other do on this site. The character's interaction between them is awesome and organic I can't stress this enough it's natural finally someone gets how people talk and behave with others it was beautiful.!Please author keep up the good work and don't leave us with the other subpar fics on this site we need your gem to keep the chapters coming!

2yr
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NiksElDrago

I like the writing style and most of the content. However, the author has serious problems in following the timeline, the world background and events in the series. Moreover, the author has also made major mistakes in the Academic Calendar. Anyway, readers should just read it as a random story with no connection to Teen Wolf if they want to enjoy it more. Else the plot holes and timeline errors would make you insane.

2yr
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Spelloyal

The MC started out as Peter Parker, a genius who was simply born with a weak physique, but when he gained super powers he became Flash Thompson instead of Spider-Man. It started out as a slow and interesting story, with the MC being someone who tries hard but was unlucky and was born with various physical problems. At first the MC was taking months to gradually discover his powers and it looked like it would be an interesting story about an MC who slowly learns magic and uses his intelligence to get the most out of it. I expected him to slowly use magic, perhaps making potions, to cure his birth defects and slowly achieve the physique of a normal person and then become superhuman, while taking risks and using magic intelligently to fight stronger supernaturals beings. Unfortunately around chapter 22 the story completely changed, it doesn't even feel like the same book anymore. The MC who still hasn't learned a single spell instantly becomes a super soldier and a Gary Stu, including instant popularity at school and joining a sport he didn't have any interest in before. The MC changes from an interesting character to one of those generic football players you have in every teen series, he even starts to get revenge on the guy who bullied him once before, even though the MC has already taken his revenge and solved the problem a long time ago. Seriously, he got revenge and blackmailed the guy a long time ago, why is he doing it again after bemcoming a Gary Stu?

2yr
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JIM_MoriOg

man the story just started a little while ago and it's already one of the best on the site, so good the development of myr, it's very cool, which girl will he be and so exciting, the drama here is very good and it's not boring just like the other story,

2yr
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