Tales of Asura (FF Version)

LV 5

mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 2

JoseDavid07_11

It is not a bad fic, but I think it needs more attention and to go deeper, almost nothing is explained, how his life has been before awakening his powers, his way of thinking, his goals, his relationship with close people, etc. He also entered Xavier's school but everything was fast, in only two or three chapters, his interactions with the other characters were not seen, he got a girlfriend and we did not know how, we did not even see a single dialogue with her, nor does she appear, part of the deaths and separation of the x-men, you only mentioned it and that's it, so it's a story with an interesting idea, but poorly worked, it's practically a summary of what happens and now (just my opinion), of all the anyways, good luck! (Google translator).

LV 4

DisastrousPride

i like the concept and the story itself .so dont drop it and keep the good work..........,............... . ............... ........

LV 15

Diegoa

This seems interesting. i have not seen any marvel fan fiction that have took this approach with the x men. Great strarting and I hope that you can continue this fanfiction.👍👍

LV 14

Pha

Bored Asura your back this is a very good day also why'd you stop writing .

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Henrique_Paiao

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LV 6

GooDie

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.