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Alexa_Games

love the book great work really a fun of the originals and tvd great work can't wait for more

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Kingshadow2324

pedophilia.. teacher want to date the main character. Main character is a child.

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Alanray64

It’s hard to give this novel a fair assessment as it is obviously from a non speaking English writer. My criticism is that the author took no pains to seek a proofreader to assist him with this and instead relied on translated words which as we all know, does not give a fair result. A comment about his use of the word retard was used instead of regressed and his explanation was the translation had it as that. I found this novel a little to far fetched, more a wish fantasy if anything, everything just gets handed to him on a silver plate. I felt no connection to the Mc and in fact found him to be tiresome and to childish to take seriously. The novel appeared initially interesting however after trying to follow the story and combined with the terrible sentences/grammar, it died a quick death in my mind. Only advice to give is as mentioned before, proofreading is urgently required and then check again. Just wasn’t worth the time.

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Isaiah_Caudill

Very very good love it just make sure to fix the translations because right now it’s hard to understand

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WisWaifu21

Just needs the words to be polished but other than that it's a good novel

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IBOR

Great Job Untill Now Just Needs Some Fixing With The Mistypes Author -san if you want i can be your editor for free if you plan to continue this novel 🤝🤝✌🏻

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Jacob_Johnson_3750

besides the aweful Grammer the story is really good it needs proofreading but other than that I have no complaints ( it's all minor stuff that if fixed will make the story flow better )

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DaoistZaR9uo

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