Synthwave

LV 10

xash_alan

The basic themes and plot of the story is very interesting. I love sci fi and the superhero stuff, but the writing style was not really what I am used to. And I read a lot so this made it harder for me to keep up. In certain scenes, further researching can be very helpful. But these are just my thoughts, all the best for future (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧

LV 1

madiha_masood

the story is amazing. its developed in a very intersting way and the idea of script writing format is amazing.its enhances your story more.

LV 4

Night_of_Dreams

The story was amazing. The way you developed the story was very unique and unlike any other writing style. Despite its script format, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. As you mentioned in the auxiliaries, the writing style will soon change in volume two, because I understand what you're trying to accomplish in volume one, and I like it. I'm excited to see how the story progresses in volume two. Your description of the characters is very informative and gives me an idea of how they look. Excellent work, author.[img=recommend]

LV 1

GMSJakers

I really like the script format of it, it's very easy to read and it hasn't been an idea I've thought of for some reason. The story developement is very good and at its best.

LV 3

nKaneis

This novel has a lot of potential. It's interesting and unique. Though the writing style is something I'm not use to. And it's not good to dump information in one go. But nevertheless this is an interesting read.

LV 1

Walt_Hitchcock

One of the more uniqu stories out there. Paying homage to Doctor Who and with a bit of Stephen King’s The Dark Tower series, we are presented with a tale that’s familiar yet comforting and intriguing at the same time.

LV 3

_Rockbison_

Nice story.... This author really has a good potential l must say..... And what l can say about his writting skill, its really really good..... Keep going author...... I am really impressed by u....

LV 13

Ramirys

This novel has a very interesting concept and story. It is very refreshing to see something like this. The only problem is the author's writing style isn't the best, but I believe it will get better and they will improve tremendously with time.

LV 11

Kapowne

I see a lot of potential here just after reading the first couple chapters. The unique way the dialogue is written is very attention grabbing. It's not what most authors do, and I think its an excellent style that is very similar to movie scripts which really helps push your imagination. I hope the author will continue leaning into that! The world is also VERY interesting and EXTREMELY unique, but in my opinion more time needs to be spent easing us into it. Its very jarring to go from one idea or concept to another with so little time in between. As a reader I like more time to invest in an interesting concept and having so many interesting concepts thrown at me one right after the other is very overwhelming.

LV 1

Kueni

I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.

LV 4

Sir_WendoS

This novel is fun to read! The pace is chill, and I vibe with the plot[img=recommend][img=recommend] The only problem that I have, is the punctuation. But all in all, it's good👍

LV 2

Sneakycat098

I am not really into sci-fi fiction, so this novel felt quite new to me. I believe the starting could've been better, especially that information dumping part. The way of describing the situation can be improved even more to ease the flow in reading. Otherwise, the storyline is very interesting. Best of luck author!

LV 4

MishalZamir

Although, I do not read this genre but the way it has been written by the author is quite good. I really like the writing style. One thing I'd like to point out is information dumping in one paragraph. It diverts the focus otherwise everything is pretty cool about this novel. I'd definitely recommend this.

LV 3

MasterPizza

First of all, congratulations on writing this. I liked it overall, although I felt a bit strange because of your writing style, which is not bad but still rare to see (something similar) here. Though I'm not very into heroic plots, it was an entertaining read, I wish you keep up your good work.

LV 4

RomanceFanatic028

I love reading about Demensions and other world genre. I am liking Steve so far but i would like to know more about him. Your writing style is also very amazing. So keep it up.

LV 12

ZeroX0666

This is definitely an interesting read, the main story isn't anything insane, but the way it's told makes you quite interested in learning more about it. Definitely would suggest a read.