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A completely normal man finds a rusted sword in the river and accidentally trips causing the sword to pierce his heart, killing him.
"Congratulations! I, the greatest sword immortal of the universe, have chosen you as my successor. Your world inspired me to make this inheritance before I perished in secluded cultivation. Take this System and complete my Dao!"
[Integration process completed. Sword Immortal System will now help the host complete his Dao of Sword.]
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Give it a chance, you will be surprised in the early 30-35 chapters; I am trying to write a unique system novel, the difference begins at chapter 30 forward.
Enjoy.
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excellent story I love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest. good perssonage construction update more remember please because I love this kind of novel
Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls Keep uploading pls
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a great novel, one of the best I have ever read, please keep up with the good work author san and please do not drop this novel, you are doing a great job
Good story so far, with a mixture of comedy and action. Hope u keep up the good work and not drop it in middle. Best of luck!😊😊😉😉😉😉😉🙂🙂
Great novel keep it up author.Also I like your other novel so update that too...............................................................
Story was amazing, I mean literally amazing. Character development is also better many most. But now maybe it has discontinued as he hasn't uploaded a chapter for a year, a pity. Anyways, you should definitely read it.
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A very unique novel. The way he progresses the novel is very unique but also very disturbing. All imma say is to be prepared. Even though updating speed is a bit lower than I like, It is still reasonable cause it's an original novel. World Background is also nice. Not exposing much of the world situation before he gets there. Character designing is also nice but you should work on the development abot more. Try not to make it a bit rushed. I don't wanna spoil but you'll understand if you read the novel. Lastly for the Author, good job and pls continue updating it.
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I really like the start and progress of the story. There is an actual plot and end goal for the mc. Thank god it's not a 'chasing skirts' kind of mc, he doesn't think with his dick or try to bang the first woman he met. I also really like the brother hood between Mc and his friend.
La historia es muy buena, el desarrollo del MC también mejoró mucho su carácter, lo unico si la emisión un poco deficiente pero bueno 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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More more more chapter more more more chapters more more more chapter more more chapter please and nice job 👍 on the chapters 👍😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Hello! I’m from the review swap but what drew me in was your title and description. Let me just take a moment to say ——— WOW! Keep writing! You have a lot of potential
Shameless Author here! I hope you all enjoy this story, it might be a bit extreme in some ways but I try to write as well as I can! This is a journey for me as much as it is for you, dear readers! Good luck!