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In a world devastated by infected and chaos, Elliot Debron discovers a strange system that allows him to accumulate vital points for his survival, but with one condition: he must have sex with women.
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if you fix the pronouns(can't even say this without remembering what the delusional ppl say)..............anyway if you stop using he/him when it's a girl or her/she when it's a guy this would get a 5 star review although you don't do it a lot but it happens during the important times where i sometimes get confused Overall it's good.......haven't played the game but i have watched th gameplay so give the ppl some justice
Damn, I came looking for copper and found gold, damn good series, keep it up champ, I hope for more episodes
Looks like I will stop reading this since you nerf MC system for no reason. Before that book was great. Long chapters, grammar was ok, the story was slow but intriguing.
Regardless of whether the fanfic is good or bad I decide to give this story 5 stars, finally someone made a TLOU fanfic, my favorite game series.
Gostei da novela espero que continue , agora me explica por que diabos é nescessário 140 caracteres para uma avaliação ? Não é como se eu fosse fazer uma analise profunda de 8 capítulos.
Nice work! Your writing is very good, though there's the occasional mix up of pronouns. Other than that I'd say its great. I hope you keep it up.
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Me encanto el protagonista es perfectamente el tipo de protagonista que me entretiene buena historia (y principalmente por que es de mi juego favorito hace algunos años) 10/10
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Honestly, it started ok but went downhill fast. In survival, you need to be smart, cohesive, and look at the bigger picture. The MC is none of these things, he is a coward in truth. He pushed everyone's buttons and argued with them to the point I would term it as toxic. He calls out everyone and tells them off without having any real input or plan. The system is basically leading it to becoming another pokemon novel of gotta catch em all. There are also comments calling him a Chinese young master and as you read through this you can't help but start to agree with them. This novel has many flaws but they are fixable flaws, a few rewrites here and there and making the MC personality more cunning and less hostile and unlikable would go along way lunky the author has only wrote 20 chapters at the time of this review so mistakes can and should be fixed.
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raw please or a tip to start looking for the raw novel of this story Incredible translation by the way, and the reason I ask for the raw is in case you stop translating and this story is lost forever
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Keep writing, its really cool to read, the protagonist is good and for now the relationships are really cool and the characters have personalities that make the work dynamic