Supremacy of Another World

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Evil_For_the_WIN

Very good. It has the potential of becoming a masterpiece. You should change the cover. Just put something like the picture below and warn that it's not yours.

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Funky_fat_monk

1 star because mannñ .. he has incalculable wealth because of his boons received by an entity. but he is still grinding character in game rather than buy the damn company ,so he can just program his character as he liked. good try bro but only idiot would do this.. but for me ..let's just say waste of time and resources of mc

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Evrabonzz

I have also written an Overlord Fanfic with the same premise as yours. Must be an accident that we have almost the same haha. But yours is quite good to say the least. My Fanfic had a really slow build up, 30 Chapters and I have yet to go to the NW. And I have so many haters hahaha. I might have given the things that they didn't want, so maybe you could give it to them. Anyway, you got your self a good plot here. Good luck to you Little one. I hope it will turn well.

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Slyyle

It's oddly bad. The Main character is kind of a retard choosing to grind rather than just you know like Funky pointed out coding himself to be overpowered. The World background whilst the author is attempting to expand on it isn't really doing that great a job, but who knows we're early in . It gets better right? No

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ReviewBrah

Good starting point, but butcher by author limited creativity. For someone that get a boon of unlimited money, u have such a narrow mind of using it. I hope author can read "chaotic good" by mister grin. That is how u capitalise on the boon. u can even do what mister grin can't done, by buying the whole company that make the game. Thus, you can exploit the hell out of it. Lets say, u aee giving the power of mods or admin that come with destructive power. or heck, letting the company tell u where all the world item at. or even better, breaking the lvl100 limit during the last few day. So much possibilities yet author decide to not stray further from the OG story thus leading to boring reading. Why bother reading it when i can read the novel again. Ok, even if you are too lazy to think that you can buy the company, you can also buy the world item from player hand. The game is almost over, surely people will sell it no? You do realise that mc boon will end after he goes to new world then why not capitalize it? If i were you, i will fkin hoard everything like a dragon. In conclusion. Dear author, i hope for your future book to be rethink twice before u write. Just keep the word, "how do i capitalize it" whenever u make mc overpower. No need to limit yourself. As a writer, limiting urself of creativity is a sin.

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EverythingRelevant

The series has started off strong and i like that ot is extremely similar to the cannon. However i hope that the author doesnt make the MC someone who wants to get along with humans. The whole idea of overlord was to make him not care at all about humans.

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Mr_Knight

one of best overlord fanfict I have read, Infinitely better than some handsome Author book ............................................please more

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kilgan

it honestly looks incredible. the issue of albedo puta, it was good to take. the shaltea issue was good too. I really enjoyed your writing and development. I can't wait to read more.

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Dl15

I thought that this is another fanfic that I will read to the middle and quit, but how wrong I was, now I want more and more !!!! I need a chapter !!!!!! (sound of a drug addict who hasn't taken drugs for a year)

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Alusec_BR1

Honestly, I liked the novel, as I don't know much English and I use the google translator, there is no way I can give a vote to grammatical errors, as the story is cool to have fun reading a protagonist who will have the dreamed harem in this world magnificent overlord, I really like overlord so who also likes it is worth taking a look I just hope he is as bad as Ains, the best arc I liked to overlord was the invasion of Nazarick's tomb, as bad as it was when Ains killed everyone including the woman who had sisters I liked a lot... I wanted it to be come to that, being an invasion in his guild there is no mercy, as it is harem tag I would not mind leaving that woman alive, but killing his companions I find it difficult, well, whatever, I will tell you the real thing that I am only reading because of the harem even of waifus in this world xD

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Hammad_Amir

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Great_maid_Oni

I'm really enjoying the story, I'm an overlord fan but I always questioned some decisions and events there and here in this fanfic some of them were approached in a better way, which made me happy. The only defect I believe I currently have is a little more stability in the post, hey, he doesn't have any news from the author for a long time. Of course, there is still a little problem here or there, but everything can be ignored when you see the whole work. In short, it is worth reading yes, but see before when the last post was made because if you do a long time it is likely to have dropped, Unfortunately it's a feeling I get every time when weeks go by without posting since we run out of news

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GodSpeed28

Has been pretty good so far, but I'll need more to form a correct judgement.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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vicky111mudi

4. 4. 4. 4. 4. 4. Nice novel ....I would love it more if we get a daily update4. 4. 4. 4. 4. 4. Nice novel ....I would love it more if we get a daily 4. 4. 4. 4. 4. 4. Nice novel ....I would love it more if we get a daily update

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Cesar117

Es una excelente historia, en mi opinión es lo que creo que deberíamos haber sido Overlord a qué el protagonista hace la diferencia, donde milonga era tonto e indeciso, este me es como creo que actuaria una persona cuerda si le pasará lo de transportarse a otro mundo con grandes poderes. Lo recomiendo, es casi tan bueno como el fanfic Origen. P. D. Me gustaría que explicarás y trajeras al harem a la reina Santa, a la chica de six arm la bailarina, Hilma de ocho dedos, y Evileye de Blue Rose, quizás también a Leinas de los cuatro caballeros.

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Ramenguy_teuchi

the stories are great. even this only a fan-fic but the stroy goes pretty well. i personaly like the development, the development goes pretty well not like another fan-fic. i will say this will be one of my favourite fan-fic. But why it takes so long for updating the chapter?. But truly your work is amazing.