Slayer Chronicles: Book 1: RWBY

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David_Anthony

No matter what happen please make Pyrrha Nikos pair up with the MC cause i am sick at Jaune and her! also keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK! keep up the good WORK!

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TJ_Watkins

Shameless author review. Ray is the twin brother if Ruby Rose and a reincarnated soldier from Earth. He is a hardworking genius with a mischievous side that doesn't trust Ozpin and builds his own power base to act as the third party in Ozpin and Salem's centuries long conflict with the intention of finally bringing it to an end no matter the cost. But how will the unexpected appearance of the Grimm Lords affect his, Ozpin, and Salem's plans for Remnant? This is only the first book in a series I have planned through multiple worlds including Pokemon, Star Wars, and my own original cultivation world. I hope everyone will enjoy this ride along with me.

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Lionheart007

Nice to know that even on this cancerous platform, you can still find some mighty fine RWBY fanfics. I am honestly excited about what you have in store. P.S. Can we please pretend that Arkos isn't a thing and add Pyrrha to the harem? (¬_¬ )

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The_Grindelwald

This author took way too much inspiration (read copy pasta) from the fanfiction "RWBY: Twins of the rose". 0 originality until now except the prologue...

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nicolas_gonzalez_5220

Solo un par de cosas que decir en cuanto a que si bien se que es un fic el echo que pongas un grim con personalidad de joven maestro abofeteado le quita la esencia a la historia para empesar se supone que los grim no deven sentir dolor, miedo te lo consedo pero lo demas.... ya parece wuxia sin contar el echo de que se puso algo como susanoo que no se podria con el concepto de aura si fuera ki lo entenderia o algo como un domo de aura pero susanoo un poco mucho. Solo eso mi queja es porque empeso muy bien pero creo que se desbia demaciado para considerarlo fanfic a demas de lo lineal de la historia yo lo dejo pero creo que mi calificacion es justa.

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Isak_Svartrapmo

You should def make a harem page and update it with every new entry And i swear to god keep yang, Ruby, Blake and pyra away from Jaune They have to go to mc

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Almus7w7

Solo tenía que emparejar a Pyrrha con Jaune... ¶~~~^~^~^^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~^~~~^~^~~^^~^~^~^~^~^~^^~^~^~^~^~~~~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~^~^~~^^~~^~^~~~~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~^~^~^~^~~^~~^~^~~^~^~^~^~~^~~^~

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VastoLordMask

great fanfic, please continue with your great work............................................................................................................................................

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LaughingArkBuilder

It has been so long since I've found a good RWBY fanfiction! Great job author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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AbsoluteLoli_Lover

Very good mister Tu historia tiene mucho potencial puedo ver facilmente mas de 500 capitulos si lo alargas y lo haces bien con relleno,citas y NSFW junto con escenas lemmon y smut con separacion de una chica cada vez

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Dao_of_Melancholy

Good stuff neet starting powers and can’t wait 4 more Yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes

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KahThelOs

Positives: quite possibly one of the best written things I’ve ever read (period.) the characters show wonderful development, the MC is properly gifted without breaking the story, the writing is grammatically correct and flows well, and the ideas behind it are creative. Literally my only complaint is that the authors updates are infrequent at best, which for this somewhat slow paced novel can be frustrating because I can’t help but want more. Keep it up, author!

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CILinkz

the first chapter is interesting but after that it is the normal 0815 teenager mc. no mention of god or Crusader or whatever first impression you had with him. even the childhood get skipped to directly copy to canon. and it follows canon too the letter with minor deviations to account for our mc gary stu

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StazIrvine

[Review] I really like this fanfic it has good grammar, its set in a world that I like and it has consistent updates. If there was one thing that I had to say really irked me its that a lot of the time I find myself noticing that I'm basically just reading RWBY the show with an OC. What I mean by this is the FF can go chapters just being a transcript of RWBY straight from the show with the occasional insert of Ray. This makes me think "Why am I even reading this when I can just watch the show". Sometimes it feels like a situation, or conversation, should have gone different than the original material because of Rays presence but ends up being the exact same. This FF really shines when the author strays away from that and makes completely original chapters, these are great and a lot of fun to read I hope the author continues to stray more and more away from the original RWBY story and continues to transform the original material into something he can "kind of" call his own. All in all its a good read if you don't mind some spots being the exact same as the source material basically word for word. Then the original spots will really stand out and make this a good read.

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Kid_Sky

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Doegly

This is one of the most fun fanfi s that i have had the plaesure of reading. You can tell from the first chapter that the book is sodcila and the author maintains that quality throughout.

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KaijinReign

Dis shit's a bomb !!! Just from the first chapter you can see and feel that the author really tried to give a substance and reason to his reincarnation. From the good dialogue from their encounter (Ray and God) to the deepest desire when he based his wishes from the 7 deadly sins. I'd give it 10/10 I just hope the author can keep up and improve as more chapters pile up.

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Emanuel_Manu

one of the best RWBY fanfic--------------‐--------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Lechuzape

I like how this goes, the MC is not an arrogant jerk, he is strong and smart. It maintains the balance between comedy and seriousness well, personally I just hope that in the future you do not get paid to read this ... I love the story and I would bother leaving it alone because I can not continue reading, I would not like you to abandon this either. keep up the good work, take care.

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The_Sheep

For now it's the best RWBY fan-fic I've ever read, keep up the good work author !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!