Shinobi system in world of my hero academia

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Aayush_storms

The concept is good but It feels like you are too young to be writing a fanfic or your English is really bad.

If u exclude system slave shit it has 2.5 chapters in total rest is system summary not worth reading

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Phoniex158

Sorry, but i couldn't get over the incorrect gramma/typos.

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Erick_Espinoza

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war_shot

Overall it's a great story with good character design and storyline but can u write a bit longer it's a bit too short

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SHADOW_WRITER506

hello guys this is your author with a shameless video. please support me with power stones