/ Teen / Selfish Battle
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What exactly is love? For Mariza, love has always been one-sided. She considers herself a loser but is she really a one? Valz Archer is a cold guy with fortified walls but will Mariza be able to thaw those walls?
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You did a good job! The story is good. Writing is Vivid and graphic. Take whatever I say as advice from a friend As a reader, I skip a lot, mostly descriptions, if they are very long. Try to keep the writing style ******. That is what I felt. Good luck!
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The story is good. I love the male chatacter, I love how arrogant he is. HAHAHA! Super cool. I am curious as to how their love story will grow. The novel is good. Kudos Author! Good job😊😊
I enjoyed the back and forth between the main characters. I think what they do and what they are thinking are different at times. You explain each sentence beautifully. I just wish the chapters were longer. I feel like the breaks between chapters makes the events lose their momentum. Overall I see where this story is heading and it seems interesting. I'm not into romance focused stories, but this one feels very refreshing. Best of luck to you author.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Try to come up with and stick to an update schedule, even if that means not posting every chapter you complete when you complete it. Positive Feedback: Well written, original plot. Good update rate. You definitely know how to be descriptive.;,;. Personal Feedback: I see much promise for the future of this novel. Sadly, this novel holds no interest to me, therefore I will not be continuing it any further. Scores: WQ 5/5 SoU 4/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 4/5
The story is interesting but seems to be targeted towards teenagers. Maybe it was because of the names but it felt like Spanish soap operas. There was quite a few grammatical mistakes in the earlier chapters. They are less noticeable in the later chapters. Paragraphs can be too long sometimes. Since some of the chapters can be quite short, it would be good if you can update more often.
This story is actually so great and addictive..From the beginning to the last episode I've read. No grammatical errors or omissions or even poor construction of sentences.. Actually everything is on point and am in love with it.. Just wish to get more of it...💗💗💗💗 I urge everyone to try it out and it's gonna be on ur list of top ten novels and also one thing is for sure "it's very addictive and interesting" What caught my attention is the plot of the story and the characters in the story, and I know that it won't turn out to become of the long boring stories full of misunderstandings. I will keep on voting and reading till the final chapter which I am not expecting it now tho...💗💗💗💗💗
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I also not into romance story much less from female POV but for giving a fair review. I proudly read it! I can see your improvement chapter by chapter. In early chapter, there a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes but decreasing as the story go on.. You can edit previous chapter you know.. Do consider space after (.) or (,)
It's a good day to give another review to my favorite author. You're always welcome if you need help with your "boosting". I hope saying that you're a girl and 15 would help in anyway, coz' they don't, even if you put it on every argument. XD
I love this novel this is one of the best story have ever read but it shouldn't end here wish it had a part can't wait for it return 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
The story is really great so far. There are a lot of twists and drama which leaves me wanting more. At this point in the story, anything could happen. The possibilities are endless and I can’t wait to read how the story unfolds. Great work so far Author ❤️😘
The story is good so far , but I'm tried of u people asking me to write a review .what I don't understand is why will a sister hate her own blood that much. But so far I love d story ,and also lessen d amount of coin in opening a chapter. thanks
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is going really well,but what is with the character of Valz memory loss . will he ever regain back his memory .also is their father not coming back .I can't wait to see what will happen next now that Valz saw Joe kissing mariza ,I love the story plz keep me updated....
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The synopsis is eye catching but then I checked when was last updated and it's been 2 months. It's heart wrenching waiting for updates that doesn't come.
It's a very good story written in female lead prospective I just love the fact how she emerged as a strong character from being a silly lovestruck girl and how she survived after all wrong happened with her i would recommend to read this novel at least once
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It was very interesting and I think all the books u make will get very good and better than this .I also Can't wait to read another one of your story's
Wonderful story, not only is the vocabulary profound, but there are very few grammatical errors. The strange love between the two interest so far is super interesting to read about and excuse my language but, Hot, very very Hot Valz 🤗
The story is really good.... It shows you the hard reality of the world around us.....I suggest everyone to give it a try...... you will really fall in love with it....
can't wait to know further... did Valz kiss mariza because he only wanted to discover the truth or he himself loves mariza?... author... speed up dear..