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Lin Shu, a traverser alongside with a system on the Planet called Blue Star.
This system made him a Sect Master and gave him a 'Hidden World'. In which every time he accepts a disciple that passes the qualification, the aura thickness on that 'Hidden World' increases by 1x which is based on the aura in the outside world where his entrance to the 'Hidden World' is located.
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1 Year later.
The Linshu Sect accepted it's 10,000th disciple.
Now, the aura in the hidden world is so thick that, when a regular person breathes in the air in that world. It will allow him to transform into a Warrior with a thousand year vitality
3 Years later.
The Linshu Sect accepted it's 100,000th disciple.
The aura is so thick that, whenever a disciple enters the hidden world. This aura activates the hidden Ancient Bloodline in the depths of their bloodline.
Great Demon!
Ancient Dragon!
Angel!
And even the legendary Pangu, although it is incomplete, but still. That's Pangu!
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I like the start of this novel. The MC isn't a spaz like most other novels are from the start he's been pretty calm and takes things as they are. The progression is quick which I look for in this type of wish fulfillment novel. It's not enjoyable to read a bunch of filler where nothing happens or if struggles are put in place needlessly to make it seem like the MC earned what he got. There is no reason to do that in this type of novel since the system is a provider type. Taking the approach to delve more into the items given and provide information and background about them is a nice touch and something other novels often ignore but is the selling point of these type of novels. He has a mission to develop the sect and he is doing it at breakneck speed. The system doesn't have much impact on his path since it's a standard sect system and it doesn't seem to be sentient which is good. I can't stand sentient systems and slave systems where it feels like the MC is the system itself. So all in all it's a good start but could use more world building. But I understand that the beginning is him establishing the sect and he needs personal strength before he can look out beyond his hidden world. I do see the classification of items being difficult to understand in the future. The system used for classification of items and how it all is broken down uses elements of other novels and some new additions. I don't like how you have a grade for an item/manual and then an additional modifier for rarity on top of that it seems a bit convoluted unless that rarity is in relation to the system instead of the world at large.