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A mysterious white hair, blind-folded man got into the demon slayer verse.. Would he be able to come back or would he be stuck in here forever? How well would he do when faced with a blood thirsty demon? Would the demon slayer corps accept him? Is he gonna be the one defeating the demons for good? Read to find out!
("Would he be able to come back" may become a huge plot point in the near end of the story ;) )
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เขียนรีวิวBeing very honest, just from the synopsis and a few chapters, I thought it would be a wish fulfillment with horrible writing.... but I was 100% wrong, the quality of the writing is incredible and it's not wish fulfillment, besides the MC literally being the Satoru Gojo and the author manage to demonstrate all their arrogance and confidence as the strongest!
The writing is good, its not just gojo randomly overpowering everyone and actually has a "good story" with some logic to it. for all the gojo fans out there...he is the main character now have fun.
Very interesting as it combines 2 most popular anime and its not straight off destruction due to over power character. The overall story until now is great and fun to read.
I am the author, So I will obviously give it five stars lol, this is my first novel fan fiction, so hoping you all like it! I will probably let this novel be action/adventure! I am planning to be quite consistent, a chapter every day or every two days if I am busy. So stay tuned!
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"Dear Author, I hope you don't mind some constructive feedback on your writing style. Personally, I find it a bit off-putting when characters like Gojo express themselves with such directness, such as 'I think I need to ask the demon slayer guy.' It breaks the flow and immersion for me as a reader. I believe there's room for improvement in how you portray character thoughts and dialogue. Perhaps consider delving deeper into the characters' emotions and motivations, which could enrich the narrative and make their interactions more engaging. I'm sorry if this comes across as harsh, but I feel a three-star rating is fair given these concerns. I hope you take this feedback positively and continue to refine your storytelling skills. Best regards,"