Saiyan System in the Immortal World

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NotSomeone

Saiyan?! *SCREAMS HARD TO GET STRONGER* HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *12 Episodes leter* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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Roktah

i'm not quite sure about this. he is a saiyan in a cultivation world, which is of course better than being a human and this is not what im concerned about, what i'm concerned about is that the mc is going to use mainly dbz skills, with his first goal being the kamehameha. the thing is that kamehameha and similar skills only work in the dbz universe. there is no way he can charge the kamehameha in the middle of the fight and the immortal cultivators are just going to watch it happen. even if he does fire it, its just too easy to dodge. another thing is that the dbz skills are very ****** skills, gather qi and shoot that stuff out in a straight line most of the time. they cant compare to the diverse skills of the cultivation world with barriers, formations... these are just my concerns regarding the future developement of the story. i'll see how the author plans to resolve these issues and edit my review again at chapter 50, if he gets that far.

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LordOfLaziness

don't give up, i love this novel pleas don't give up ppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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ReaderKei

This sound interesting I hope for more updates 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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DaoistBlackGold

It has a really intresting story and title. I love these types of fanfics please dont drop it. It has awesome potential. Hope you also do daily uploads. Thanks

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Khrams

At first, this novel looked like another terribly constructed fan fiction. However, after reading all the current chapters, I am pleasantly surprised. There is a fair bit of logic and reason in every action the main character takes. The plot is well thought out, and the writing quality is among the best I have seen on this website. If you are looking for a good fan fiction, or just a solid novel, I definitely recommend this. However, the update stability is annoyingly slow, especially since this is a novel I personally have been liking so far. However, I understand that the author has their own life, which I respect. Needless to say, when the update stability gets more regular, I will definitely make this at least a 4 star review.

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Hipknow

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One of the better quality fanfics hopefully you won’t drop this story since it has great potential. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Lucifero

Good story keep it up dont drop It👍👍👍.

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deikatsuo

I like this novel, Really,

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readeramit

Too good . No funky too fast growth. Want supar saiyan fast ,. I hope the villains would be over powered. ..................... ..................

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Bossatron546

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HollowGod

well , its a great story to be honest , but the one thing the sucks is that its already 2 months and no update :/ the story is proboly dropped , so if u wanna read it be warned

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lUnnamedl

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Matrixshado

Great start, love the progression not too fast or slow just right, great background of the world and characters so far. This so far is the best out of the series of saiyan originals it's not forced nor does it seem like a mix and match of varying ideas nice and smooth

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Clark_De_Mathio

Even though there is another db novel going on I hope to see the novel come to levels where the blood boiling effect comes when I am watching db series. I hope this novel is not given up.

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redstorm321

One of the few well done novels done by new authors. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And don't stop with the updates

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Nightcoffe

IT really good Hope u can up the update!Come one more chapter! or eles ill go saiyan on u1 HAHAHA!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA going super saiyan 3 HAAAAAAAAAAA

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chaotic0fan0mind

cant wait for more its one of the best DBZ fan-fiction iv found, looking forward how it progresses and i wish it updated fasterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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liontrappedincave

The story has great potienal. There are many references to the actual franchise like the nimbus and the martial arts, however the story isn't repetitive and IS NOT A RIP OFF of dragon ball. The MC relationships with characters(not in a sexual way)have some detail but not to the point it is overexagrated.

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MikeBee

1st of all, out of all the Saiyan fanfict here in Qidian why is this one the lowest in rating when clearly it is one of the most interesting to read! Anyway, I reccomend this highly to those who likes a good fight, a sensible character build up. If you have free time while waiting for your favorite, i highly recommend this as a substitute read.