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Royebin: A Star Wars Story

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Jon a former Sith and stormtrooper battles Padraw, his former master who looks to gain respect over deaths of trillions.


Main Characters:
Jon Royebin
Lam Nassau
Lord Padraw
Erne Corasta
Robot/B3-ZX7
Bothka

Recurring:
Kema Namun
Enodo Ifedi
Jasu'lane Nirvara


Expect 3 chapters a week; up to 1.0K words/chapter. Feedback and suggestions are welcome, even important lol.

**NOTE**:
I DO NOT own Star Wars, Disney does! This isn't something that pays me so yeah! It's just for fun!

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คุณอาจชอบ

4รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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NaphtaIi

Hey, author here! Yea five stars but I'm just here to say that I've changed up the story abit and made it better, in my opinion. If you have any comments or something you don't like lemme know because I'll be doing a full rewrite soon!

4yr
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Daoist493176

Nice novel the MC and his companion the droid have good chemistry and the master is just a prick. Nice story love to read more! I suggest you do more of the romance arc because what you have in the second chapter was very sweet and very sad too. Hopefully you get it somewhere good.

4yr
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Zonion
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First set of review, as I haven't read all of the chapters expect another one once chapter 15 or 20 is out. Well here we go. Personally I didn't really expect much from this story. It didn't really grab my attention, this is mainly due to my dislike towards the character and their idiocy. Not only that but the premise of the main character being trained as a with yet not having the Sith qualities that is expected of a Sith. My biggest problem is that the main character is a... FURRY.

5yr
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Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

3yr
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