บท 50: Rewrite!
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A/N: After careful consideration, I decided to rewrite the story, especially after rereading it, because apart from the obvious grammatical errors, there were a few unanswered plot holes.
Anyway, I just finished rewriting the first chapter, and I can honestly say that it looks a lot better.
The chapter is also much bigger, to try and make it as complete as possible and to fix all the mistakes from the last story.
So I decided to see what you thought, just in case you didn't like it. Back to the old story.
New Story: DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
The chapter will be published later, so I await your first impressions.
I would also like to remind you that most things will remain the same. It's not a new story, but a rewrite to improve the concept of the story.
So see you later <3
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