Retribution: A Pokemon Story

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kgton60

I hope that you can continue to post chapters This is a promising fanfiction please keep it up and continue releases You have my power stones This is a Pokemon fanfic that is not op and has humble origins absolutely love it that it's not op Don't make mc have all rare Pokemon a few are good enough

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DiperZ

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ThreePurities

when you write a command to the pokemon, please don't end it with "or something" it hurts my eyes. write it with confidence(I just feel annoyed for some reason.) and please take note of the spacing it makes everything look bad. beside that, the story is nice...

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maxbaez

no hay palabras esta muy genial la historia y como avanza, y como funciona el sistemas y como e prota sabe algunas cosas pero no es un genio en total

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Jeremy_Kramer

This is one of my favorite Pokémon fanfics that I have read. Love the starter, a Pokémon that I like that doesn’t get any love in other fanfics. The MC’s development is steady and a true weak to strong situation. I’m excited to read what the author does with the story.

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Hollysummoapocaly

Es la historia de una persona normal que poco sabe de Pokémon e ingresa al mundo Pokémon es a la vez relajante y emocionante Además del hecho de que tiene una idea base para fortalecer los Pokémon que desde mi punto de vista es bastante inteligente y lo que haría yo, mientras que no dañe o algún tipo de repercusión por esto. Creo que sus pokemon seran uno de los más fuertes El mundo es más real.

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Asura101

This is a great Pokémon fan fiction, which captures what Pokémon is like in the games and the show. While also giving it a more realistic aspect—seen in the violence of the Pokémon world. As an avid Pokémon fan this is an enjoyable read which so far (20 chaps in) will have a progressive realistic growth. Recommend reading!!!

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Zoro_r

Great novel and very intriguing read I must say author you did a good job but you can do much more better. Like background development and make pokemon world much more realistic. There are only few realistic novel of pokemon out there and your's got potential to become one. By your sadistic way **cough ** I mean real life approach of making MC's life miserable. This novel got that kind of vibe in it. Good luck 👍

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Plutonium

While the story has good development it is super slow. Author tries to make the world seems real instead of the ignorant world anime has portrayed, but the story seems to be filled with character created to make Mc life harder. Mc tries to act smart, but he is so foolish, which is a good character development for future, but he was around his late **** when he transmigrated and he is so innocent, it seems like he was really a 10 year old. It’s not a bad story but it’s also not a good one. I am surprised he is not dead without a plot armour, or does he have it.

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Weirdo

Good fanfic with hidden golden finger... That alakzam is a sh1thead for not unlocking or at least drop some hint about his psychic power... Hope he would start train himself and his pokemon or some training montage... His pokemon is sh1t even after 10+chapter and I'm talking from Ash perspective that had the forever Pikachu...

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Kurosis

A good pokemon story I've read loads MC doesn't start out with an op pokemon but a humble or not so humble shiny weedle. mega beedlril *hint hint* MC uses his head unlike ash although at times can be reckless with keeps story interesting.