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There is a programming error in the system called the world and a guy is a bug. God has volunteered to do experiments on him and after the successful experiment, he is reincarnated to a fantasy world filled with adventure, mystery, and magic.
This is the story of a man who was reincarnated as a 15-year-old boy after a crazy experiment from God. A tale of how he restarted his life in the new world and how he became a Hero from Zero.
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Rules:
1) Usually, multiple chapters will be published every week. I will let you guys know if I am taking a break.
2) If we are able to reach 1000 powerstones weekly, I will release seven extra chapters during the weekend.
3) I am willing to work on suggestions and comments from my readers.
4) The credit of the cover picture goes to Aldnonymous and his friend Feni fenol which was released under Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 Unported license on Wikimedia Commons and was modified by me (author).
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Note: This story is meant to be a fun isekai series. If you don't like such series or if you are looking for something too serious to read, this is probably not the one for you. You can try my other book 'Rising Against Fate' if you like a little more darker and serious type.
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This story if ever dropped I will harass you(author) until there is another chapter. That is how good this book is, from the battles to the author's sense of humor just makes this book better. that is all
Great read loved it thank you keep going think you have a great story and plenty possibilities to explore like the Harem vibe that you are creating would be nice to see some that our MC opens his eyes onto all the subtle clues that they drop
The story is lacking in emotion. I feel the MC is just a third party making comments. It's like He's not the MC but rather a side character. I'm pretty sure a side character has spoken more then he has. He also doesn't have any noticeable personality. He's kinda dumb really. All the characters are really. Their like children, even though their at least 15. It's like they can't think for themselves. Example being when asked why to become a adventurer. It all seems forced in the plot, like their forced to not think. I've only read till chapter 30 but you I see no change in the story that has hooked me. The only selling point is the genre and him potentially being a dragonking. But even that is not enough of a selling point with no fleshed out character development or world development. The only reason I've not given it a 1 star is because I didn't read the full story, but I just couldn't. 30 straight chapters with nothing interesting happening. Yeah no. Another reason is because I commend your effort you at least put in making the story. Good luck though and hope you improve.
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Zero here! It's zero--OOFF!!! Let's see... A typical genre that became popular in Japan from 2012, but originally, this genre first published in 1980. This is a genre that I always edited and supervised... Well, the story about MC got "reincarnated" into world because crushed by truck-kun or car-kun...hummm... Writing Quality It's simple and easy to read. Keep it up, cause you don't have "Mystery" tag on your novel. Stability of Updates You promised that? Then do it if your wish come true! At least you must make a hanging ending and a bit long chapter. I'm rooting for you! Story Development I saw "Harem", "OP-MC", "Magic", "Reincarnated" tags on your novel. So, I have known "what will your story become". At least, do not make a "Typical Japanese Isekai story", cause it's already "well-known". You must make your own story DIFFERENT than that. About fantasy "elements" such as Beasts, Monsters, Magic, Runes, Chant Words, The World itself, Monarchy, Kingdoms, Lords, Gods, etc...I hope you can explain to the readers in simpler ways yet interesting. Since Monsters, Politics, Magic and Adventurer Equipment are the most difficult "elements" to explain (from my experience). Well since, this genre is my forte, do not disappoint me and your readers! UFFF XD. Character Design I have known what they look like, what they will do and what are their characters, because it's still chapter seven, I don't want to make a comment "outside my view" and I don't want to "go ahead of myself" because "it will ruin everything" World Background It's typical "World" in "Fantasy Genre". So, I have known that and their types. Here we go! and then excuse meeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....whoosh..... Note: If someone wants to ask about review about fantasy genre or learn about fantasy, please contact me!
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Underwhelming 'First Impression', the story telling in this novel is comes off as somewhat immature, naive and forced. The side characters are just props that rarely show 'true' human emotions, shallow and without depth. Lackluster flow of dramatization, and many confusing contradiction that's made by the author him/herself. And all of that's just from reading the first few chapters. Well, it's true that people said the key of making a good image, is good "First Impressions". This novel failed to intrigue me, apparently.
The story is so boring and looks like kids bedtime story that it makes me puke rainbows! Dropped at 26 chapter as I can’t take it anymore. Qu’Ali of writing is good with some mistakes here and there. Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5* Story development... There is none! It’s so boring that it hurts. Started ok and that was the best part of the story. They are just training and talking. No action except 5 sentences fight with demon at the beginning. Character are weak without personality, makes me even forget who is who as the author tries to give them different behavior styles but unsuccessfully. World background. Is it bad or good I don’t know. Author explains that there is a lot of discrimination from nobles and demons and war and orphans, but there is no hardship in the story! The worst thing the noble does is speak harshly to Demi humans. Everyone is happy, well feed and even orphanage looks like living in a hostel. No demons no fighting no killing. Basically everyone sings kumbaya while holding hands. They are even so nice that they tell their team configuration and strong points to their enemies... Waste of time.
For starters, it's just like the typical reincarnation story that everyone loves. The storyline is definitely enjoyable. Sentence construction, writing style, and choice of words are great. However, just like any typical reincarnation with a harem, it needs more uniqueness in it to be noticed. Good job with the plot twist as a Dragon God, though. Keep it up, author. Have fun! 🥰
This is a must-read novel if you into sword, magic, fantasy, and demi-human with no system. The author did a great job with descriptive world-building, characters have a personality, and the plot is on point with great logic. This novel has the potential to be a harem since it introduces a lot of waifu so far. Overall this novel is a hidden gem and very enjoyable to read!
Oh, let's see, it's an anime like isekai novel. The reading feels like that the writer himself is an isekai anime fan. I liked the story but the characters design could have been better. Describe the characters more, (eg. what they are wearing). And also certain terms such as "miko" might not be familiar for non-japanese readers. So try to describe what they mean in the story. The concept looks very interesting to me, as an isekai can myself. Overall I pretty much liked the story. I hope you can keep your promise and release at least 1 chapter a week. Work hard.
Good story so far, character development slow but building nice and evenly, in my opinion, overall well done because i can see the scenes in my mind as i read them and i actually care what happens. Hope it continues.
For those who like Isekai and the development that you can expect from them, this is the story for you. Don't take my word for it. Try it yourself.
Interesting concept for sure. Always good to see new fresh ideas! Excited to see where the story goes and how the main character will change and develop.
I have been reading this story for a while now. I am really surprised to see the writing mature here. As the story progressed the Writing quality and the overall story telling kept on getting better. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.
I like the different ways you have made your story. I like reading rencarnated book and this one is definitely differ twist, in a good way, we'll done author.
it's some what close to the story on anime but like the twist its always have. lest see how far nara goes and how powerful he can become. if you like anime you will like this story
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So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this... My rating overall is about 3.8 The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way. Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts. He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character.. Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess... Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience? This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more. Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.
it is a very good story I just wish there was more of it but ill have to be patient for the time being. can't wait to see how t hey get out of the dungeon.
I am so looking forward to reading more of this story it did start out slow but the pace does pick up and the characters do become more interesting as the story continues
I liked what I have read till now but as this gerne is not new so I won't say anything about that but if you can do something that set it apart from other then it will be great but current status of it is looking good. P.S. Try to put inner monologue inside quotation mark.
I have made the writing as easy to understand and error-free as possible, but if there are any errors, you can let me know and I will fix it. I will publish at least 3 chapters every week. I can publish more if I have more free time from work. I am a student + worker but I will do the best I can :) The story development will be fast in the first volume since it is more focused on building the plot for the future story. But there will be steady development focusing on the world and the characters from the second volume. I know some people like a long descriptive start... But really, I think it would be too boring if the story without making much progress at the start. The harem: Yes, the pieces are coming together. The character background: No, even in a fantasy world everyone doesn't have a dark past, and 'I will create a revolution and change the country' like goal... Some may have such background though :P Isekai: You may find it like every other isekai if you only read the first few chapters... There are twists in the later chapters. I am a The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fan so some reference may be used from there. (eg. the world is a program).... :D But there aren't many sci-fi elements here and No gaming elements. I hope you enjoy the book. Even if you don't, thanks for giving it a try... You guys are awesome :) So long and thanks for all the fish!!!