Reincarnated in TDG with the Library of Heaven’s Path

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INOoY

I'm writing this just so author doesn't get demotivated. keep up the good work there will be people who will try to demoralize you, everyone makes mistakes that what make us human. don't get stuck on them take them as learning and improve over it.

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Jason_Sin

It's rather refreshing to see a character with some common sense. Indeed, directly going after the canonical MC would be suicide 99.9% of the time, and going after his power base is a wise decision. Hope to see more updates for this amazing fanfic

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Pill_God

I'm mainly writing this because author asked but I'll try to give a relatively honest one. Writing Quality-5 I don't particularly see any grammar errors though it may just be my loss of sensitivity towards them Story Development-5 Though the events are somewhat similar to the beginning of TDG, they are not exactly the same and is different enough to be interesting. (I mean, its a fanfic, there isn't gonna be big changes early on) Character Design-4 The character is pretty good, manages to build up his family when he's young and uses the LoHB pretty effectively. He also doesn't really wait for the plot to start and prevents some things at least that can be prevented. Update Stability-3 I mean, it's once a week which isn't really bad but not really amazing. Since he clearly mentioned it early on, I don't mind too much though. World Background-5 It's a fanfic so I don't really see a reason not to give 5

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Gamesnames

Read the Prologue and it was Good 👍 [img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins]

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Weirdo

Keep up the good work author.. There's alot of plot hole in here but I'm sure you will have improve the more you write.. A suggestion to strengthen mc family and allies would be some kind of inscriptions that could gather energy into your compound and make it have denser energy, some of cheap resource like purple haze cultivation for grunts, sending them hunting beast for the beast soul and sacrifice soul for energy like nieli, teach more forging technique,inscription on weapons and outer wall fortress to prepare for invasion of beast,stop nerfing mc LOHP,use LOHP more to improve literally everything.... Anyway, feel free to ignore me though.. It just my opinion after all.. 😊

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jenangbungbung

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Darius_Chromwell

overall decent novel, not the best i've read of a ToDaG series but not bad.

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starking

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

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Asphorus

The FF is good. Great grammar but there are typos, there are also words that are used wrong like rather of writing 'write' it was written as 'wright' instead. But I don't really mind it. Overall it's great even though I only reviewed the Writing Quality, I guarantee that the other aspects of the novel are good.

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CookieFighter

Honestly, why make a review when some people already did a good job and said every important things better than me ( i may have misSed a few but who care?) I LOVE this tdg ff, good start and all so please keep up the good work and don’t bother with haters ´cause they are the lowest of the low on internet

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Vasiliy

5 star

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PUERKO_Senpai

tales of demons and gods fanfiction ................................................................................................................................

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Fahad501

Paste no jutsu INOoY: I'm writing this just so author doesn't get demotivated. keep up the good work there will be people who will try to demoralize you, everyone makes mistakes that what make us human. don't get stuck on them take them as learning and improve over it. Sorry bro I so Lazy

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Xelade

truth be told, this is really well written . Good background, Good development. MC is not a moron, and make smart choice. Not op from the start but grow stronger at a good rate. 10/10

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gkfk

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Darth_foreskin

Just a well written, wish fulfilment novel by webnovel standards that us no lives will eat up, good work man please keep it up. I recommend everyone give this a try.

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Z3RG102077

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Vasiliy

interesting

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Daoist_Castle

So far the story is getting good even if there are only a few chapters. Though I'm writing this review because this story is underrated like so many others and deserves to be given a chance, as well as to motivate and encourage the author that their story is being read and enjoyed by others! I'm giving this a 5-star just on principle and as an expectation for more quality chapters!