Reincarnated In Merlin

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Sirius_drake

Never thought I would give 5 stars but I am satisfied that the MC is not just a ridiculous side character but helps to address the problems and still leaves Merlin enough room to grow, I think it is very well done, the end of the original series was very unsatisfactory, this is a good opportunity to set things right, even the updates are fine for me as long as there is always more to come of course.

LV 14

Crabble

This entire story is in past tense and for some reason he goes from mc bezing Boen to him being 18 without any warning or info. This whole story missed out on any development Of any kind.

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DaoisteHo6ya

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Afonso_Aaron

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as_ss

its not good, and nothing is explained.

LV 15

Roktah

grammar is seriously bad. what wh know are the mcs wishes, he then gets reincarnated and an immediete 18 year time skip happens without warning, all that we know is that he got instant mastery in the time and learned some skills. no character development, nothing. world background, doesn't exist unless you know the source material. you just get thrown into the story. this story needs improvment in every apect.

LV 10

Nathan_Just

I hope you continue this story because it is the only one with merlin and it has good potential to grow into something better then the series it self

LV 4

Absoluto

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DarkDei

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Zicarius

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LV 4

Cody_Mohr

impressive story hopefully it continues someday to see where it goes

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AnjoD4Morte

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LV 5

Classified

The start is a bit rushed with most of his life being skipped over. Writing is more readable than other stories with authors that have english as a second language, but it still needs a little improvement. There is a good balance between the main character trying to keep the plot and changing the plot. It sorta feels like the main character doesn't do much right now, but i assume he will have a bigger rile in later chapters. Over all good read keep going!

LV 4

GrrodGroot2002

If you are going to coninue writing it I recomend to re-writed it and gry to write it where world is a combination of Merlin+Harry Potter+Marvel and contact autor of Magnus in Wizarding World and try to do some world building together.

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DaoisteHo6ya

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LV 4

Khan00

I Just finished the first chapter and im excited to keep reading but before i do I need to know are you going to keep posting consistently for a fee hundred chapters since I dont want to get my hopes up just to not see another chapter when i catch up? 😅

LV 3

DarkDei

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The story has a lot of potential and the writing quality isn't hard to read and slightly improves along the way so not really an issue. The only thing is the story wasn't updated for months so not sure if it will stick around.