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It was just a game; one Evan played way too much, but it was still a game in the end.
At least it that’s what it was supposed to be...
However, on the day the main quest ended, he discovered it was more than just a game.
The world of Aidos was real and the demon threat was even more so.
He was sent to be the leader of the new generation of heroes and save the world from the demon invasion by the god who made the game.
Unfortunately, nothing was as simple as it may have seemed.
As the truth behind the invasion and the previous Seven Heroes was slowly revealed, he began to have second thoughts about his choices.
He began questioning if the demons were truly the enemies of Aidos.
Even more so, when he discovered a new truth.
That he may not actually be who he thought he was.
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WSA 2022 Entry
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DISCLAIMER!
This novel is a work of fiction and though it draws inspiration from historical places and events, it is by no means meant to be a realistic representation of any current or historical events, places cultures, or people.
The story may contain themes and events that may be disturbing to some people and if you are "triggered" by pretty much anything at all, It may not be suitable for you as I will not limit myself in terms of themes, events, or topics while writing.
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A amazing book, the develop itself nicely and show a good background. The story is also very funny! I highly recommend to read it if you have the time!
It's a great read. The story is going good. The upload schedule is regular.
Venti…. Im just here for venti. Venti…. Im just here for venti. Venti…. Im just here for venti. Venti…. Im just here for venti. Venti…. Im just here for venti. Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Hey there, it’s your friendly neighborhood author. And yes, I’m shameless enough to give myself five stars. ✨ This is my second novel and my entry for WSA 2022. I hope y’all support me!🙂✨ Also, constructive criticisms are allowed🥲
19 chapters was all I could trudge through Just mediocre all around bunch of info dumps and system stuff that is never interesting world just feels like mediocre jrpg no interactions between characters basically, be it positive or negative characters are uninteresting be it mc or his fiancee, there isn't really any more currently (the gods I guess but they are like meh) handful of copy pasting a part of a previous chapter as if we can't scroll up, basically just increasing word count(just this behavior justifies dropping) is it possible that after another dozen+ chapter is will become much better, absolutely. actually chances are pretty high seeing as currently there nothing worth reading about this, so it can only get better from here. its just too boring wading through mediocrity. would not recommend but it can be read I guess, just don't expect much or anything at all for at least 20 chapters.
Superb description and good food for the imagination The prologue caught my attention and made me unable to tear my eyes away from this title
The story seems intriguing enough to make one continue reading. very good and promising. It's a good read! Keep up the good work! 🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Overall it's a great start but MCs emotional development is not upto the standard. I hope this story has harem content. Try not to drop the story,because it has a nice plot.
excellent writing. well thought of story with much potential.. down side. author drags out every single thing into multiple chapters made it to chapter 18 before the excessive details and filler paragraphs finally did me in. if you are very very very patient it might be a great read
Venti is on the cover.....
Really a good novel 👊🏽✨. But need to work on making the descriptions of people or places fewer 😭
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be a ntr in the work (I hope not), is the fmc a yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
I'm loving this story at the moment the world is great and sucks you in story development is good quality is up there for WN all around i think this is a 4/5.
as a fantasy story that most people would like to read, the story's setting is vividly described in the narrative. Hopefully, the Author carries on with this momentum and doesn't let readers down.
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The story is really a fantasy, most people crave for, I am able to enjoy the characters development and most especially the world, my mind does pretty well imagining what u trying to create. I feel the story twist will get more wilder
The story has potential. It had me hooked from the prologue. So far the pacing is good. Not too fast nor too slow. The action flows well. The only gripe I had with it was the slow releases but it seems that has changed recently. Anyways I’m definitely looking forward to this one.
It's a fantastic story. It has been a really long time since I have read more than 600 chapters of a novel. However, I just got tired of the author's tendency to drag things out. I thought he/she stopped at ch 200, but I was wrong. Although the author doesn't drag everything out. They do it for some things which tugged at my patience. Also the world background seems to be developing more than necessary, and I only see it getting worse. Too many new things are being added such that I stopped paying attention to it all together. Next is the, quite literally, random chapters. Initially, it was some radom set of characters in some random battle somewhere. Then it developed into what certain characters that you don't normally see, are doing. It's not necessary to have but it is not something I would consider bad either. It still added to thinning my patience. A certain event that pertained to the MC's level which spanned about 200? or more chapters significantly reduced my patience. It was resolved at a recent chapter of where I am but my patience was really running thin. It ran out after the author continued to drag out battles and expand world background every chance they get, introducing a large volume of information that I am not curious about. Well, I learnt a lesson from this. When a good story meets an author that likes to drag things out. It turns into a matter of patience rather than how good the story is.
I kinda liked it, it was a fun read. I hope that the author continues the work and finish it deservingly.