Reincarnate as Yukari Yakumo, the Gap Youkai

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SpiralCat

I rarely give someone story a review, but I see a potential in this story. This is my suggestion for your story, like you can make a plot point like when Yukari got bored after finishing DxD world storyline, she can to go mutiverse in the future with her boundary manipulation ability. Well one more suggestion, you can use grammarly "use the free version" to check any grammatical errors in your story as long as you dont use the automatics function, you can see any error in your story for free. Keep up the good work author sama. That's all from me thank you.

Great story, i like this novelll!!! Nice background I like the MC pranking nature The writing method is quite good, the world development is quite thorough and the story is easy to understand

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Random_0P_Being

The idea is great but the way it's written is bad let me point out some of the problems 1) theirs no explanation about mc powers 2) the Mc personality did a 180 from an average girl as the author says to now a mischievous and playful personality 3) the author messed up with how he made the wish I think he wanted the mc to have Yukari powers and experience but when she was transmigrated the author kinda overrated the personality of the mc into that of yukaris 4) the Mc just reaches the dd world and right off goes messing around? It's off-putting like there is nothing original about the mc

LV 2

TheNeeD

With each new chapter, the story looks worse and worse. 1) Zero emotions, an empty hero - Died? Well, he died and died, who doesn't happen to? Zero emotions, zero reactions. Met God? Pfft. I see them every day, what's the big deal? The hero has no past, just an unnecessary dummy. 2) The smartest, most logical, most correct move on the part of the heroine. Which one? And the one when she tells everyone right and left that she can shift the boundaries. Hmm.... Okay. How did he (Vali) know she it shifts exactly these boundaries (see the fifth chapter). What prevents her from using the same time or space to increase the activation of the mechanism or redirect magic somewhere into the void? 3) Oh yes, another author who forgets that in English (and not only) there is such a thing as "PRONOUNS" in the language. Is it that hard to replace the name "Yukari" with "She"? Of course, it's easier to write her name ten times.

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nariaki_kinugasa

Mantap terun lanjutkan ceritanya, udah lama gak dapet cerita yang menarik kaya gini, semoga update nya lancar, sama jangan lupa elemen bertarung, interaksi sesama karakter, romance, world building nya di upgrade ke tingkat berikutnya 😁😁 overall mantap 😎😎

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Absolute_Qlipoth

I love tohou but why is the mc female I know yukari female I mean why did you make mc female?

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ONGFRFR

lol i love troll MC FF, so keep up the good work.

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Smertonos22

Unusually and it seems interesting, I'm waiting for the prod)))

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Ahmad_Nuzulrul

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LV 4

GeshaKun

Great FanFic to enjoy casual reading through WN. Gotta fill up 140 letters so this is just to extend my review till I can press the Post Button.

LV 14

Theroxis

I don't want to mince words, it's quite bad. Sorry .

LV 4

GyroJapster

When are you updating my guy?! I will even give you stones to update...

LV 1

MarkTGoG

the fic is great so far, it has major potential...especially since i have not seen a single fic to incorporate this idea (being reincarnated as Yukari) its a bit annoying that it hasnt been updated in two months, but everyone has things they have to do, so i understand Overall, its a great fic, and i cant wait for the next chapter!

LV 1

Mafahl

You know I haven't read any of the pages but I've already given 5 stars because yes THIS IS YUKARI YAKUMO. TOUHOUUUU.