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Reborn as Shido in Date a Live
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George, who had lived a harsh life, died at the hands of Truck-kun, but his soul was straying and caught the attention of an outer god, who gave him a chance to be reincarnated in another world. The Outer God gave him three wishes
What kind of results could he expect from his efforts in this new life of his?
Let's see next time on Dragon Ba-- ough ough
Disclaimer: I do not own the original works that would be included in this fiction, including some of the characters, stories, and artwork. They are the property of their respective owners.
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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Might be favouritism (very much so) but I just gotta support another writer that writes DAL fanfics as the number of good DAL fanfics can be counted on one hand! Now onto the actual reveiw! The grammer is great (a lot better than mine) The inclusion of the system fits in well, but I would like to complain about some plotholes with Mio, as she would be able to sense these things happening (as Shido is not able to use the full power of any spirit he seals he can only use like 50-80%) Overall I rate this 5/5 because it is a DAL fanfic
I enjoyed the 7 chapters, it may be short but It was worthwhile, I like how you tried your bet and did you best. If you ever update this fic just know IL be waiting
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