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Bruno_oliveira

Okay, let's get real here for a sec. Writing? Love it. Translating that same writing? Man, that’s a whole different beast. Imagine pouring your soul into crafting a killer story, only to then try and tell that story in a different language. It’s like singing your favorite song but in another genre. Do you lose some of the original vibes? Maybe a bit, but the core tune's still there. Now, about the language barrier - that’s been tricky. When you translate, you're not just swapping out words. You're re-telling emotions, life experiences, and even bits of your culture. I'm all about authenticity, so trying to keep that genuine feel while hopping between languages? Phew, it's a trip! And here’s another thing: I’m always learning, always evolving. Stories change, and so do I. Every feedback I get, every review I read, they shape the next chapter, the next plot twist. I’m committed to making sure my stories aren’t just good for today, but they're also ready for tomorrow. Wrapping this up - this might sound like I’m patting my own back, and maybe I am, just a tad. But hey, sometimes it's cool to acknowledge the hurdles, laugh at the mess-ups, and promise to keep getting better. For me, for the story, and most importantly, for you guys. Cheers!

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DaoPrince10

Everything is good, but please don't make Jon a naive character, he should prioritise his strength foremost , It was Gwen decision to leave him( there is always a way ) she prioritise her family, for her benefits though reluctant it was her decision, Jon should think this with his brain 🧠 and be calculating whether 1: To achieve his goals, while surviving in this harsh world 2: To thow his plans away for a girl who leaves him when life gets hard , simply put she is not faithful, whatever the reason may be I don't want him to harrass her or get revenge. Just let her be.When in this world there are beautiful people everywhere and there must be more talented and loyal female for him in this world for him. Just put it this way would you rather have a wife who sells her body when life gets rough for you whether she loves you or not doesn't matter. Let's be practical he cannot have every women who loves him as his lover That's just destroying your hardwork done on this novel. Please I implore you to think about it. Gwen is not for him and I would be very sad for Jon if he gets out of his way to disturb her life when she has already come terms with it . Life doesn't work this way Your decision now will impact the story greatly and it's this decision which will set apart the mediocre novels from your work. I went out of the way just because I felt this novel resonate with me. I in no way want to degrade you but just said what on my mind. Please 🥺 ponder upon this. Effort done on Gwen is just not worth it her personality is not of a queen for our king ,he should understand although he put his life on line fighting ren. Even when he supported his decision to go to the academy before him. ##She will leave him when she finds no other way out.## Indulging in this women will definitely break his life. Even if she returns it will be for her benefits. Other mc might just be okay with an apology but I don't want jon to be like this. Heck she isn't even a main character. It's a do or die turn for this novel. Author please think even in real life why would you marry an ungrateful person when you can find someone much much better. A man cannot conquer the world if he lets his mind and emotion be swayed by such trivial things. We don't want Gwen as his lover. Neither you or I would love such person So why make Jon. A leader cannot make such rash decision as such is the cost of success. This is not a wuxia. All the best sir your work is astounding just give it a thought.

Muito bom, o mangá é bastante interessante, protagonista com carismático, história legal desing de personagem muito bom para uma primeira história, ambientes bem feito recomendação para ler !!

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Nick_Alex

the Story is really good but please put NTR warning next timei got hella depressed reading Gwen actually starting to fall in love and Agree to a Dude that literally eyed her like a Piece of Meat and deciding to choose him over her Childhood friend she is deeply in love with because The dude saved her mother and is entitled to herElara is a sweet girl tho and i really like her so maybe she should be Cover girl since Gwen is gonna be forgotten because she is gonna marry Roderick just like Paul married MJrant over sorry about this

Obra coesa e equilibrada que mostra uma nova leitura e abordagem sobre um tema muito apreciado por todos. Que tenhamos mais caps para nós entreter ainda mais.

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Stella_Vermillion_8770

the writing quality of the story is phenomenal, and the side characters are not just npcs ,the have their own unique story, life and the romance part of the story is real like every girl won't automatically fall into mc's hand.

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Keegphil_KP

I love the book so far. I like how complex the characters and each of their emotions are. I hope the author doesn’t drop it and continues to write the story regularly

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DaejunSan

Boa meu rei continue assim sucesso com a obra, espero que traga ela no seu canal. Não vejo a hora de ver lá também. Vou ler agora aqui e assistir no seu canal caso você poste lá também.

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Hey y'all, quick shoutout to this novel I'm into. Writing's crisp, updates are like clockwork, and the story's got me hooked. The world-building? A+. Characters? Solid. But let's talk Jon, our MC. The guy's not just some overnight hero; he's got depth. You see him grow, and it's legit satisfying. So far, this one's a must-read. Don't sleep on it.

Hey folks, just wanted to drop some thoughts on this novel I've been reading. First off, hats off to the author for the quality of writing. Seriously, it's top-notch. The prose is clean, the dialogue is snappy, and it all just flows. Now, let's talk updates. Consistency is key, right? Well, this author's got it down. Regular updates without sacrificing quality? That's a win in my book. As for the story development, it's been a wild ride up to this point. The pacing is just right—not too fast, not too slow. It keeps you hooked but gives you time to breathe and take in the world. Speaking of the world, the world-building is stellar. It's rich, it's detailed, and it complements the story rather than overshadowing it. And the characters? Don't even get me started. Except for Jon, our MC, of course. He's not your typical overpowered hero; he's complex and well-developed, and you can't help but root for him. So, to sum it up: if you're looking for a well-written, consistently updated novel with solid story development and killer character and world design, look no further. At least, that's been my experience up to this point.

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Bruno_Brunin

Yo, I gotta say, I'm really digging this book so far. The setting? Man, it's so well-written, it's like I'm right there. You can tell the author put a lot of thought into crafting this world, and it shows. And let's talk about Jon, our main dude. Love how he's not just some OP (overpowered) character right off the bat. Nah, he's got layers, man. He's well-constructed, and you can see him grow as the story unfolds. It's refreshing to see a character that actually feels real, you know? So yeah, if you're on the fence about picking this up, just do it. You won't regret it.

Muito bom, o mangá é bastante interessante, protagonista com carismático, história legal desing de personagem muito bom para uma primeira história, ambientes bem feito recomendação para ler !!

E uma bela obra de arte parabéns ao autor , espero que a continuação permaneça em tão alto nível quando do obra até o momento , em tempos aonde e tão difícil se encontrar obras que nos façam sentir prazer em acompanhar estar presenciando essa obra e de um prazer imensurável

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Thiago_Bonato

Muito Bom !! Excelente !!! Excelente Trabalho !!! Otimo Desempenho da História !! Ótimas Ideias !! Ótima Escrita !! Grande Abraço !!! Olha difícil ter paciência para escrever uma redação de tantos Caracteres quando eu só quero dizer : Calyango continue fazendo esse ótimo trabalho. Você está apenas no começo. Você tem muito a fazer como escritor.

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Adorei todo o conteúdo da obra, realmente é muito empolgante toda a história e com ótima ambientação. No meu ponto de vista é uma obra com grande futuro.

Novel muito top!!! A história está bem legal e te prende, vc não consegue parar de ler. O protagonista tem muito carisma e com personagens secundários bastante interessante, também tem uma ótima ambientação.

A história é muito boa e muito divertida , essa pegada de VR deixa a história muito contagiante e empolgante , Sucesso parceiro você vai longe .