Razevan Lucifer

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GreatSage_Master1

Here GreatSage_Master telling a little about my new Fan Fiction. To tell the truth, this is a story I wrote several months ago, but for various reasons, I left it aside. However, a flash passed through my mind, and I decided to take it up again. The first volume covers the entire Civil War in the Underworld, and it was written before it was published. Unlike my other Fan Fictions, the protagonist of this story does not have a system. Why is that? Because I'm tired of systems. Well, I'm going to tell you a little bit about what the story is about. Razevan Lucifer is the son of Rizevim Livan Lucifer and the father of Vali Lucifer. Or at least he is at the original HighSchool DxD. In this story, Razevan is the son of Rizevim and a Nordic goddess (I won't say which one). He loves all living things equally, but he has a preference for women from birth. Why is that? Everything has its reasons. Razevan's Peerage is going to be made up of beautiful women. But they are not only beautiful, but they are also very powerful historical figures. Holders of Longinus? Revolutionaries of the ages? Only the most beautiful and powerful women can enter Razevan's Harem. There are going to be R-18 scenes, and quite a few. However, you have to wait until the end of the first volume to find the first one. With all this, I hope you enjoy the FanFic.

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Sissy_Destroyer69

Ignore all the hateful comments, stating that the MC is beta and M stuff. You're doing a great job and I'm enjoying it very much, a very intresting new theme for DxD! I'm pretty sure the Hate comments are passed on by the virgins fatties who only want to imagine a naked Pussy in their mind, those piggies don't know to write their own stuff and discriminate when they don't get some wish fulfilment from the Story they read. You're great!

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AlexTravels

Promising, going to enjoy this. No system= no boring statshits in the long run. Aaaaand the character is not a jackass! Not a chinese young master!huuray! Also,please, continue the Dragon's egg!

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LaurentCross

Story is good except the mc is a beta and grayfias Bitch so I couldn't continue it. I don't understand why aurthors enjoy beta cuck mcs. Basically your mc single handedly ruined this story.

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LifeIsAboutChoices

How should I say this... MC is quite bland. It's true that he is cool type kind of guy, but, the way he does things is not to readers liking and quite stupid I'd say. He like chasing girls but don't want to chase after Serafall and Grayfia which clearly in love with him, it's weird like wtf kind of weird, you tried to chase after girl because it feels right, but, why not those 2? Why specifically them? Author never try to answer those question. Premise of the story is really good, but, the MC make it unbearable. I know that author try to keep MC as low-key as possible and then when the time is ripe he/she will create a situation that make MC solve a big problem to appear cool. Buuuut, the build up to get there is freaking boring!! The MC almost done nothing except for sleeping and chasing girl which is not shown. No romance between main leads, no progress at all. It is frustrating for us reader that's why we are complaining. You are just basically telling the fight between anti-maou and maou faction. And I bet it's just prologue, a f'king long prologue, I hate that, we hate that.

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Eight_Lord

I'll say, I thought this was a waste of time, I read chapter after chapter thinking it would be better, but no, so I'll tell you the reasons for finding this story boring and not that great, but since I hated Jack ripper, let's go by parts!

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6Bingus9

"Is there anyone that can stop him from doing what he wants?" Yeah. The bane of all MC's in fanficitions, it's called, "The Author isn't writing anymore".

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0Gilgamesh0

bien ................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Nyxarias

AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Beta Bitch -.- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Lord_Dracen

It is a excellent storyline with a well developed main character, i can't wait to see how you will develop the story as you come near the canon timeline.

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jeanpierregerardo

good. ............................................................................................................................................................

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Alexander_27

well I won't recommend this, it's a bore with a useless mc who barely exists in the plot.

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Ulan8055

if you are reading this comment this comment is cursed your parents will die within five years to undo this curse you need to copy this sorry y'all,You can't underestimate the random people curse.

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Sesshomaru_

I can get what everyone was saying about the character dodging romance between Grayfia and Serafall but romance is not in the tags so I was not expecting anything good or sub-par in this field. The mc being beta is hard to understand as I cant see why but again that is most likely coming from the people thinking giving your male friend comfort or a shoulder to cry on is gay. Would I have liked to see better romance most definitely but at the end of the day it was still a decent read without it. Seeing the author doesn't seem to do well with romance it probably would've made the story worse if he tried to add more.

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Hanek_Pineda_UwU

Solo con unas palabras puedo describir esta historia es increible y estupenda, pero lo que mas llama la atension es el desarrollo de la historia

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Daoist721221

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gray_frost

i like your take on the story................................................................................................................................................